This was a really sweet, cute story. Your writing made it easy to imagine the characters and the actions. I could envision poor Sephiroth getting his hair pulled and Vincent offering sweets. Your review was correct in saying that it matches a doujinshi- you should probably consider writing an English doujinshi. I would try to go to a convention just to buy one. :)

Happy Sunday and keep Aspiring,

Paris the Literary Princess

That was so KAWAII! I think I'm gonna explode from the cuteness overload! Ha Ha! _

so... how young exactly are these 'little boys'? :S

...Interesting fic, tho.

That was so adorable! Little Cloud, little Vincent and little Sphiroth. soo cute!

XD ! Cloudy is *so* cute!

This was not only well written but incredibly cute too. How can you not like this? I happen to notice you got a rather inappropriate flame. Well, nice to know a homophobe when you see one.

I must look at your profile now.

That was so cute! I loved it! Please, write more stuff like this; you did an excellent job!

AW *keeps going until the world had ended* that was SO C-U-T-E _

Love this! Would you be ok with me making this into a little doujinshi? (Kawaii pleading koneko eyes) Onegai?

hehe!_I loved it!_

AW! That was so cute! i love it! great story! _

Heheheh, cute! Keep up the great work!

firedraygon97

Oh, and IAMHATED? Go suck on a battery! If you don't like yaoi, then don't read the freakin' story!

I don't like yaoi, but I read the summary, it looked funny, so I was open-minded and I read it! I used to yell at authors for writing yaoi, but I learned my lesson, and you need to CHILL OUT!

ok, I'm going to be honest and short.

I don't like yaoi let alone yuri, but I still thought that was rather funny.

AWWWW! OMG! KAWAII! *squeal* I'm on sugar rush JUST from reading your fic! I love it to death! I DO I DO I DO!

Ne, as someones elses asked, if u do make it into a doujinshi, can i c 2?

and btw-Iamhated: You ARE hated, and what's w/you! You can't even spell "yaoi" the thing you'rre complaining about right! MG!-idiot-

NEEWAYS! Write more? Draw more? I dunno, just "more?"?

TOO CUTE! SO CUTE! CHIBIS! CHeating cibis for a kiss! That scene is TOO CUTE! I can SO picture Vin-chan pulling Sephy hair! and sephys look I LOVE IT! AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT! WAI!