Reviews for The Heart of a SOLDIER Discontinued until i say

Reviews For: The Heart of a SOLDIER Discontinued until i say

astrakage 2008-02-23 ch 3,	abusePlease update this. I really want to see how this goes.
little dog 2007-12-12 ch 3,	abuseA good chapter all in all. The speech was so... exuberant. You should probably work as... well, a person that comes up with slogans for the commercials, heh. :) Only one advice: don't have Sephi make such open threats too often. It's much more fun when he is less direct and when he has more than just beating the devil out of his subordinates. You know, when he is rounded as a character. Good luck with your writing.
tsuki-ame 2007-12-10 ch 3,	abuseEK! Major fan-gasm Yes I was right, Sephi-kun did come! Great chapter, albeit your grammer needs a bit improvement. Awesome presentation of Sephiroth, although he went through a major mood swing there...but its all good! You came through on the deal. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up!
tsuki-ame 2007-12-04 ch 2,	abuseI agree with little dog, there hasn't been 2 many cloudxseph fics. And not to many doujinshi i might add. Gosh I've missed the younger, naive Cloud. Ooh and I think I know who's gonna be at "the special assembly." Its short, but I don't care as long as you keep to your promise. Keep up the good work.
little dog 2007-12-04 ch 2,	abuseWhy oh why so short? whines sniff I hold you to that oath, ya know. It's not bad, only... (paraphrasing the guy from Two Stupid Dogs): "Isn't that cute... BUT IT'S SHORT!"
Fallen-Yuki 2007-11-22 ch 1,	abuseM. It looks good. The writing is good, I think you only mispelled like one word. But your dialogue is... wierd? I guess to explain it. It's all very formal. Like how Cloud talks to his mom. It just seems too formal, especially if Cloud is only 14 or so. I can't tell if this story is AU or not. You might want to include that. I see you have an OC. Which I think is one of the main reasons it made me wonder if it was AU. You might want to be careful with the name too. I know there is a compilation of one or two stories that feature Reno and an OC named Cera too. They might get it confused with that. Anywho. It does look good aside from the dialogue. Keep it up. :D
little dog 2007-11-22 ch 1,	abusea good SephiCloud is always welcome. Lately there has been a lack of them. And this looks like one. i said to myself: no more ff7 stories on my favourites list, i've already got too many. However, I've decided to make an exception. Hope this is enough to make you finish it.
N.River 2007-11-22 ch 1,	abuseehehe... nice. i like it. keep on writng. ehehe Cloud sounds like an 18 yr old. giggles even fairly attractive akem.. clears throat Sephii huh? >w< ehehe MAKE SURE U FINISH WRITING IT. whe...

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