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| Enarra 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was really wonderfully crafted. |
| Malvolia 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI liked this a lot. You have a gift for character insight, and the parallels between the two company girls (and their fathers) were done very nicely. Never thought about Elle having trouble touching people before. Good fic. |
| Tuathail 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseOuch. Beautifully written and well-structured. I really enjoyed the way you brought the parallels together with the last few lines. Thanks for sharing! |
| Icy4aReason 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abusei love it!! |
| motylik 2007-11-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe last part was the best. The last line killed me. Beautiful imagery all around. Poor Elle. Poor Clair. I hope you write more with these two because they're dynamic is awesome. |