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Reviews For: Company Girls

Enarra
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseThis was really wonderfully crafted.
Malvolia
2007-11-26
ch 1,
abuseI liked this a lot. You have a gift for character insight, and the parallels between the two company girls (and their fathers) were done very nicely.

Never thought about Elle having trouble touching people before.

Good fic.
Tuathail
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuseOuch. Beautifully written and well-structured. I really enjoyed the way you brought the parallels together with the last few lines. Thanks for sharing!
Icy4aReason
2007-11-22
ch 1,
abusei love it!!
motylik
2007-11-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe last part was the best. The last line killed me. Beautiful imagery all around. Poor Elle. Poor Clair. I hope you write more with these two because they're dynamic is awesome.
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