great but so sad...

love it

fighting back tears! so sad but sweet

Isn't Yukina Hiei's twin sister?
I don't know... it's weird. I think that no one could hold the rest of the group from seeing Hiei for the last time. And it was... too much pathetic for my taste. sorry...
Format is somehow weird too, try to write in paragraphs and do some line of division or something between the story and disclaimer and each parts of the story. And do something about line spacing...
It looks too uniform and it makes it harder to orientate.
BUT
I like the small Yukiei, she is sweet :)

It's really sad, but it's kind of sweet, too. As sad as it is, I liked it.