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| Dreamer22 2008-07-14 ch 13,  | abuseI love it, and look forward to what Tim says to Ziva!! |
| Holen-Snape 2008-07-14 ch 13, | abuseTim mentioned Tony getting killed. Was that Tony Dinozzo? Love the story and looking forward to more. thank you |
| starjems88 2008-07-05 ch 13, | abusecan't wait for more! |
| lkhoward88 2008-07-05 ch 13, | abuseThat was an amazing new chapter! I always look forward to reading new chapters of this story! |
| zats 2008-07-05 ch 13, | abuseThis is the best crossover story I have ever read. It is a mix of personal relatiionships and mysterious adventures. I await what going to happen next. |
| WynonaRose 2008-06-22 ch 12, | abuseGreat job. Looking forward to the next chapter. Really like that Daniel and Timothy are friends. |
| FireWolfe 2008-06-21 ch 12, anon. | abuseNice piece. NCIS is llosing out. Lisa |
| charmedones65 2008-06-14 ch 12, | abusei love the story |
| Dreamer22 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abusehm very interesting, well done, i look forward to seeing whats going to chance NCIS :-D |
| rquestforme 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abuseWow what a twist. Jenny working at the SGC, now that I can see. Keep the updates coming!! Rquestforme :) |
| Harm Marie 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abuseInteresting. I thought they were just coming about his father's case. I like how you have included some Judgment Day stuff. |
| Nyx Ro 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI like the dialogue here! Brisk, breezy, and unforced. It's also fun seeing someone who knew Daniel Way Back When reacting to his ease with The Movers and Shakers! I WAS a little thrown by, "His dog... is a very affectionate horse." I was wondering if Jack owned one of those miniature horses I've read about. Maybe just "He has a very large and affectionate dog," instead. But I love that Jack named his dog Atlantis! And that he was finally able to GET a dog. |
| zats 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abuseRediscovered your story and love it. Can't wait to see what you do to Jenny. Write more soon!! |
| Raven Artemis 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abuse? it tim offering what i think he's offering? a better question though may be does jenny want to be an alien? interesting idea, can't wait to see where it takes you. :) -Raven |
| starjems88 2008-06-13 ch 12, | abusea telephone wired into his drain? how did you come up with that? |