aw...

That was a wonderful story. I love the atmosphere of it. Brilliant job. :)

I can only say: Oh my gosh!

And I swear its in a good way O.o

I really like the athmosphere you manage to create, the sensory input is really wonderfull, it feels to the reader like they are there with them. With all that Hotness! Very hot, indeed!

Nice Fic! All Hot and Sexy as it should be hehehe.

Anywho, the narrative is good and expressive, though a bit confusing at the middle between TK and Daisuke's speach.

Love the story, and the ambiance(sp?)!

Keep the good work as this is my favorite couple of them all!

Shev

(Shevira83(at)hot

HOT!XD