Glad i found this story really enjoyed it. Thanks!

Such a sad chapter, but i'm loving this story, can't believe i've only just found it.

Off to a great start.

great story

great story.

great story.

I really like this story and I hope that ypu continue it. will her dad come back? will mac and harm get together?

okay, i'm fairly certain I reviewed this chapter, but i think when i submitted it, the site did that "experiancing an overload" crap and it didn't go through.

Anyway, i absolutely *loved* this story. Your writing technique is very impressive and i can see everyone doing the things you've written. I've noticed around here that a lot of people, when trying to slap in a sudden new family member into Harm's life, they can't make it realistic enough, or logical enough for us to believe it could really happen. But you've mastered it and it all makes perfect sense. I salute you on a job well done.

Now I'm gonna look for more of your stories!

c yas

sancti

wow, u sure like to write long chapters! I'm gonna read more later.

Once again I'd like to emphasize how *real* the kids characters are. I feel like I wouldn't be surprised if they actually existed. Logan scares me. I hope Harm takes care of him. I'll be back for more!

c yas

sancti

i loved these chapters, nice and long too. I'll read more later! Kally and Kaiden's characters are so real and you really feel like you *know* them. And everybody is in character!

sancti

okay, i just found this story while searching lazily around the site, and i got halfway through chapter 2, and I *hate* to stop, but i have to have dinner. I'll read more later! I love this!

sancti

I absolutly adore everything you have ever written! I am a HUGE fan of JAG and hope to read more of your excellent fanfics!

Sequel?

This is a really good story. The only problem I had with it is that Kallinda behaves more like a fourteen year old than a ten year old. At age ten, most kids haven't developed the challenging attitude that typically comes with junior high school and puberty. She also talks like a young teen rather than a girl. Kaiden is really cute, and I liked Kayla a lot too. Would have liked to see a bit more of the Harm/Mac dynamic. This was an awesome read. Thanks!

Finally! I have been waiting for ever for the finished product. I almost gave up. LOL Good story. Needs a sequal, with wedding bells!