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| La.Regina.Di.Morte 2008-09-17 ch 3,  | abusestep one... check step two ... check step three ... check wait, not yet.. kay, humm... I like it? no no, that won't do... I am intuged by the curent story line and way of telling... no that won't do either.. damn, to late, I have to stop reading now.. ok, step three ... check step four, ermm, check, half anyway.. |
| Seagem 2008-08-28 ch 1, | abusei absolutly love this story and this harry its so cool. plz update soon i beg of you. |
| imgonnadie 2008-08-17 ch 7, | abuseExcellent story so far. Please do continue to write. |
| Draeconin 2008-06-27 ch 8, | abuse>I’m leaning more toward Hermione and Harry, myself. Sorry to hear that. Personally, I write Harry-Draco, but I like reading gen stories as well. Het stories? Not so much. |
| Draeconin 2008-06-27 ch 6, | abuse>Soon they arrived at the Surrey Courthouse You DO realize that Surrey is a county in England, and not a town? The (fictitious) town the Dursleys live in is Little Whinging, Surrey, England. >Petunia grabbed the pencil and signed the appropriate places on the document Legal documents cannot be signed with pencil, as it's too easily erased and changed. They must be signed in ink. >his excitement was shared with the other entities in his mind When are you going to introduce, or explain, these 'entities' - and why Harry isn't upset about them being in his mind? |
| Draeconin 2008-06-27 ch 2, | abuse>Date of Birth: February 2nd, 1988 Harry was born in 1980. So Hasae is eight years younger than Harry - which makes him... eight years old? |
| hpfananita 2008-06-16 ch 8, | abuseGood story, shame it seems to be abandoned. |
| fraewyn 2008-06-04 ch 7, | abuseCant wait for more! Please update soon! |
| helbaffy 2008-05-20 ch 5, | abuseGreat chappy! I wonder where will Harry study, if not Hogwarts?! And could you put some interaction with Remus?... He is so cool... and it would be awesom if they formed some kind of bond! :) p.s. Update soon! :) |
| helbaffy 2008-05-20 ch 3, | abuseI really LOVE THIS STORY! So please update ASAP! :) |
| Minerva McGonagall Rox 2008-04-13 ch 8, | abusePlease update? You said "next weekend", it's been 2 months. If this is abandoned, let me know, K? ~Minerva McGonagall rox |
| Minerva McGonagall Rox 2008-04-13 ch 4, | abuseOut-of-body experiences are pretty, aren't they? Keep it up! BTW, I have the dream song stuck in my head, too. ~Minerva McGonagall Rox |
| Minerva McGonagall Rox 2008-04-13 ch 3, | abuseThis is great so far, quite well written. I hope we find out more about the Icy Voice. ~Minerva McGonagall Rox |
| DaxLP 2008-04-06 ch 8, | abuseCan you please not lean towards any pairing? The stereotypes people use are really starting to annoy me, kindly avoid it. Love Harry's sense of humor in this. :) |
| DramoSkye 2008-03-23 ch 7, | abuseAnyone read Mercedes Lackey:) I like your plot line for now you definitely need to have something big happen in the next couple of chapters though though I doubt that'll be a problem now that there's a odd vampire out there. Have fun and keep up the good work. Never let something you love become a job" |