Can u put it up it sounded good and I really liked it so I think others will like it to...its funny that you did not know it was me lol

It's still scarying me. -_- Anyway, I finally got the time to review! :D First off, I know the answer to the riddle! It just came to me so suddenly, I was like whoa! Hehehe...Is it LLLOOOOOOVVVVEEEE? Psh, yeah I'm wrong right? Second, how'd you figure out all the fears for everyone?

Anyway! UPDATE SOOOOONNNN! What happened to the others anyway?

You know, I know that your story was inspired by LJ Smith's the Forbidden Game, and that you are going to change things up, but you need to fix the beginning. Parts of this is copied word for word right out of the book, I have it in my lap right now. If you update it, i want to see what you do w/ the story, but it isn't cool to kinda sort of copy like that, even if the whole story won't be like this. Switch up the words. Do different events. Don't make the beginning a shortened version of whats already in a published book, please change this first chapter it's pretty much the same as the book. Good luck with your story, I'll be waiting to see whats next with our dear sakura.

plz update soon :)

OMG! its wow i dont even have a word for this story other than AWESOME!

add the next one please! its so god!

I like this story A LOT! I can NOT WAIT for the next chapter and is it a movie called cloverfield and is it a book? If it is a book and/or movie is it scary at all?

This story is really good, I've never actually read anything like this it's very unique. I like it!

oh now thats an interesting twist to Little Red Riding Hood :P oh oh oh i think i might have the answer to the riddle! is it love? cause love can make people cry it can make people laugh it can definately make people young it is born in an instant and it definately could last a lifetime the only thing im not too sure about is if love can bring back the dead but in a sense it could ;) anyways great chapter and looking forward to the next one :D

this is so cool! X3

It's really good. Update son!

OMG! THAT WAS WEIRD BUT AWESOME! I LOVE IT SO PLEZ UPDATE SOON! I WONDER IF THEY WILL FIND GAARA!

Creepy. Good chapter

I love the new chapter...

your doing really well with the story.

The only advice i can give you is that

Sasuke obviously has some sort of history with sakura

i would explain small pieces at a time of what exactly his past is (if your going to reveal it)and only explain the last piece (the most important Piece) last at the end of your story.

That way you'll have really good suspense through out your story.

I'm not telling you to do this... cause as a writer i personally hate it when people like order me to do things. Or outright hate on a story.

Hope you update soon

MZ/KL

-used to be Miss Zeana

Keep on updating :D