I always knew she was talking about doing it when she said she doesn't want him to be preocoupied. Though I did have my doubts when they drinking wine and all that

That bit with the Important-Looking Pirates had me in stitches XDD Good job! I love this!

I absolutely loved that! XD Now whenever I play the game, save and go away for a bit, I'll wonder what's going on in my computer without me there XD

THIS SO SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED FOR REAL!

Seriously, this was awesome. A perfect little cut scene! You really had everyone's voices down perfectly. And I loved the mental image of wet Guybrush all wrapped up in a blanket by the fire. Aw! No wonder Elaine jumped him.

:-D

Bravo, and never stop writing.

Ah, I think I'm a little young for that.

Haha just kidding. It was great. Very detailed...

Maybe too detailed. XD

Write more soon k?

Wow, I really enjoyed this, I have to say. It's very well-written and the little story itself is just very interesting. Well done :).

I have to say, also, if you hadn't said at the beginning, I would've never guessed you weren't a native English speaker. Your English is great.