hm interesting. please update soon, can't wait to know what happens next!

do you know that you musnt stop writing this fic
ireally like it so please write and continue
there isnt astory that resemble this one
so as i always say (( UPDATE SO DAMN SOON ))
:D

I promised I'd review! I wrote a really long one when the site was down...that was annoying. But I really like this story. I can't wait to find out more.

The only problem I had was that it was confusing to understand what was going on at first. Like, it's an AU where Renji is still a Lt. but he's never met Tatsuki, so it's hard to figure out which things I can assume about the background. Does that make sense? The more I read the more I could understand because I got more of the context of the story. Hope that helps, if not you can PM me.

But it's great writing and the plot has a lot of creative potential. I'm excited for more!

freakin awesome!
love it (especially the ichido in a gang bit :D )

please keep going: ill be watching for updates!

hey! i saw this on LJ community... go on! it's seems really interesting!

Rather interesting AU you've created. Im curious to how it will work out.