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| spnMom 2008-08-20 ch 11, | abuseI liked your ending although I can see how you could have kept right on going. I would have loved it if Bobby tracked down how to save Dean... I really enjoyed your story... Thanks! |
| spnMom 2008-08-20 ch 10, | abuseGeeze, I sure am glad I don't have to wait for an update after that cliffie! Sounds like Cold Oak all over... I hope it is just a little blood... poor Sammy... POOR DEAN! Love it! |
| vonnie836 2008-06-10 ch 7, | abuseI wanted to read the whole story and review in the end, but this chapter really grabbed me. This is another great read from you. Absolutely excellent medical drama. No matter how many you write, they are always different and always exciting. What I really liked about this chapter was the priest, Father McLeod. What an awesome character. I just love the way he talked to Dean, how he related to him and instead of scaring him off, put him at ease and made him feel better. The amazing thing is, that I knew the priest was a spirit before you revealed it. He just had this air of supernatural about him, or maybe I'm just nuts, but I knew and I was hoping I was right. So now I quit rambling and go on reading. Hugs, Vonnie |
| supernaturalbuffy 2008-04-20 ch 11, | abusegreat story. i was just browsing around and found this one. you definitely know how to keep a reader on pins and needles. and i liked the ending. sometimes you just got to end it that way or like you said, it never ends. anyway. great story. |
| Rat 2008-03-15 ch 11, | abusethat was a good story, but i wasn't expecting the ending to be so abrupt. Anyway, good job. |
| XxCrash.And.BurnXx 2008-02-10 ch 11, | abuseAw, I'm sad it's come to an end. :( I love this story. Anywho, I agree it needed to end open-ended, so this was a great last chapter. :) XxCrash.And.BurnXx |
| wcfan 2008-02-05 ch 11, | abuseSo wait. You're just gonna leave it like that? No more chapters? Not even a sequel? Damn! Not the boys are gonna start haunting my dreams...wait a minute...Winchester boys, in my dreams...this could get interesting. Anyway, the whole 'i'm not a psychic freak' thing broke my heart. Aww...Sammy. How can you think that? But I like the way you made Sam be the key to save Dean. That was awsome. If only he could remember... Until next time. |
| SamDeanLover28 2008-02-04 ch 11, | abusehi Dawn, or should i say Feretory ?Superb Superb chapter story is beautiful and you r very talented *winks* well i hope to read more of your story (that is if you plan on writing another story) anyway as i said Superb story hope to read more of your stories. Shante/SDL |
| bb1028 2008-02-03 ch 11, | abuseGreat chapter. I loved reading this story, and i'll be looking forward to whatever you come up with next :) ..beth |
| Al-luvs-Kitties02 2008-02-03 ch 11, | abuseI'm gonna keep it real with you. I was kind of dissapointed at the ending. But i understand why you did it. I really loved the story you are very talented! Thanks for writing it! |
| ziggy.uk 2008-02-03 ch 11, | abuseGreat final chapter, no complaints from me that you ended it there - you can either add a sequel at some point or just leave it where it is - both would work! Interesting that not only the amulet but also Sam would play an important part in saving Dean from the deal - no wonder the demon erased some of his memories when he opened up his scar, he's obviously worried at the power of the youngest Winchester! And his powers have not disappeared with the death of the YED - intriguing! Can see why Dean does not want Bobby to fill in the missing gaps for Sam at any cost, he cannot bear to lose him again, even though he might well put his brother through the exact same thing! Bobby on the other hand will keep looking for the answer! Great story, loved it from start to finish, amazing writing - thanks! |
| skag trendy 2008-02-03 ch 11, | abuseThat's a nice idea, leaving it open ended. Yeah, I agree with you. Sam may well be the key though there's one thing that worries me... the laws of the balance of nature. If someone who dies comes back, won't that upset the balance? It's a hateful thought because we all want the brothers to defeat the contract, kill evil, save innocent humans, and basically live a long and happy life. But it rarely works out that way, don't you find? And in their 'less than chosen' occupation, their lifespans would be considerably shortened anyway. That's just the way things are. Sorry. I've just come back from a long and rather boozy lunch with friends (a major past time here in the Channel Islands!). And I have a tendency to ramble... Good chapter. Hope to read more of your work in future. Kind regards, ST.x. |
| PassPtOfObsession 2008-02-03 ch 11, | abuse*Claps* Very good! Having watched the last episode-I hope do God you're right! I was so ** when Ruby told Dean that there was no way out of the deal and that he was going to become a Demon! I mean come on, that would be the end of the show if that happened because no one would watch it without Dean in the picture! Therefore, I pray one of your ideas finds its way into Kripke's head |
| gidgetgal9 2008-02-03 ch 11, | abuseIt was a great story Dawn. I think you ended it at a good place, it is open for a sequel, but not really a cliffie. I really enjoyed this story and look forward to your next. |
| Deanaholic1 2008-02-03 ch 11, | abuseomg.omg.omg great ending..:) |