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Blood White Panther
2008-09-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is so heart-wrenchingly romantic! Love it.

~Panther
A.Annie.N
2008-07-13
ch 1,
abuseGrinning stupidly right now.

Beautiful.

Annie
Alli Copen
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abuseVery nice, I really like the parts before they get together because there's sexual tension haha.
I'm a big fan of sexual tension!!
Anyway great writing again!
alwaysandforever08
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseAwesome. That's the only word for it.
endymion015
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseI am absolutely speechless. Your choice of words, the sequence of events, the flow of thought and all the dasey sweetness...I don't even know what to say, except for I'm now officially a fan of your writing. Wonderful work.:)
saicho-18
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseoh my gosh. it's perfect.
Person Of A Strange Origin
2008-04-15
ch 1,
abuseTHAT WAS SO CUTE! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! It was so amazing. I couldn't believe how cute it was. Please keep up writing because your an amazing author/authoress.
Person Of A Strange Origin
twilight-fanficwriter
2008-03-25
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. When I started the story, I questioned the use of second-person present, because I'm always skeptical of that grammatical structure, but this is one of the only instances I've found that actually pulls it off. ::Dramatic voice:: I laughed, I cried, simply gorgeous. In all seriousness, though, this was a wonderful story.
daseyfan2008
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abusethat's so sweet!! =]
Hawkeye375
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely love this story. *still sighing*
DaseyFied
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuseThis was amazing... no other words to describe. =)
random lurker
2008-02-07
ch 1, anon.
abusethat was just...freaking beautiful. your writing is awesome. it's very touching and realistic. i enjoyed it immensely. thank you.
clowneygirl
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseWhat a wonderful story. So schmoopy and sweet. I think I'll need to call my dentist soon because surely this ending was sweet enough to rot my teeth. I'm grinning from ear to ear after this and I'd look pretty weird without teeth. lol

I can't wait to read more from you. You are one of the few very talented writers in this fandom.
MaybeBaby27
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abuseThat was fantastic!

It was such a different writing style that at first I didn't think would work out but you did it perfectly. I loved the mixture of the present time and the flashback and how I as the reader knew exactly what they were feeling without you giving too may details. The story was incredibly simplistic and slightly complicated all at the same time.

I loved this story and I am not attempting to kick myself for waiting this long to read it (It's been in my bookmarks since you posted.)
Jaden Ink
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abusethis was amazing!
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