Yeah! A cliff hanger! Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!

Whoa... A pretty evil name for a cute kitten. Haha. If Serenity is called Shizuka, I'm used that Joey is called Katsuya or Jou.. Haha. Anyway, nevermind that.
pls do continue writing.

Ooh, a cat possessed by a demon, the fangirls and now this! Keep up your awesome writing!

I LOVE THIS STORY! it is PERFECT! you have to update ASAP!

i like it so far... cant wait to read more
^^

Ha sneak past the guards, that's funny.

shizuka is hot!

Hi! I'm glad that I helped re-inspire you! This story has a great plot and you've really got a greatr writing style. Also, how you use their wpeech is good, they're usually in character pretty well.

The things you could improve just a bit on if you see so fit:

I see so far is that it's rushed and Shizuka's a bit out of character. Shizuka seems to be alot more-- mm... I don't know how to describe it, but she's usually a bit more sweet and positive and innocent. Kaiba kinda scares me in thism fic-- even from a good guy perspective, you seem to portray him as kind of mean and doesn't seem to have exactly good reasons to want to go out with Shizuka.

As for the rushed things, you're a really talented writer and I'd really like to see the plot drawn out a wee bit, a little more detail and more specifications to the timeframe. Also, you could have Kaiba think over why he likes Shizuka and think over why he's so desperate for her to go out with him or something.

VERY VERY good! I am enjoying this story! Please do continue (hopefully I can manage to keep up with my own XD haha)

Wonderful work, keep it up!

Mysteria Pearl

This is a really good story.. I started laughing when Joey saw what his sister was wearing. I hope that Kaiba doesn't hurt her.. I wonder who the person is that's coming towards them?? Please update when you can...

OH that was so good please update soon!

aw... kawaii
i love this pearing

I like the story... Please update whenever you can.

I hope taht she doesn't regret going to the tournament with Kaiba... Please update when you can...

WOW!! Now Shizuka is getting threats from that little **, she had better watch her back because it sounds like that ** means to do make her pay for her going to jail...

I'm glad that the ** went to jail. I started laughing when Roland said "Joey Wheeler's here" because I knew that he'd fly off the handle and blame Kaiba for his sister getting hurt.. When poor Joey went flying because Kaiba tripped him well I nearly fell off my chair laughing. Those two are like putting oil on a burning fire...