 thinking-about-it 2008-04-24 . chapter 5nice one
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 magpup4 2008-02-26 . chapter 5I'm surprised this story doesn't have more reviews! I haven't been checking out new stories in awhile. I decided to browse some of the Blood stories as I just updated my own and, believe it or not, haven't read a single Blood story yet. Anyway, this is very well written. I barely have time to get on here anymore, but I'll keep my eye on this one when I get the chance! |
 RadiantBeam 2008-02-08 . chapter 5Holy crap, I was beginning to worry that this awesome story was dead. oO;;
Did I ever mention I LOVE how you write the Kai/Saya relationship? Maybe it's because it's from Kai's POV, but everything seems so sweet... but at the same time with that painful touch, because Saya views Kai as only a brother/friend and he knows it.
(BTW, I updated The Scent of Summer recently... I think I changed a scene in episode... 42? The one where Diva offers to make Kai her Chevalier?)
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 -xXxRebals-SongxXx- 2008-01-26 . chapter 1loved it |
 xXMercdesXx 2008-01-02 . chapter 4hey-this is a great story so far please update soon-cattie |
 RadiantBeam 2007-12-21 . chapter 4Aw. Somehow, reading all this from Kai's POV makes me feel... just a little sorry for him. The poor guy. His heart is in the right place, if nothing else. He means well and he just doesn't know what to do at this point.
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 Edward'sTrueAngel 2007-12-13 . chapter 3Wow, this is REALLY good. I mean, reading it I thought it sounded so much like Kai, things that he would say. And since he's my favorite character, I'm really enjoying it. Please update soon, you're doing great! Keep it up. |
 Jayuna 2007-12-10 . chapter 3Oh! This is quite good! I love all the KaiXSaya that you have going on!^^ Can't wait to read more!! =) |
 RadiantBeam 2007-12-10 . chapter 3Aww, a shoutout for little me? I just love this fic... there isn't nearly enough (well written) Kai/Saya love, and this fic is awesome.
I like how you write things from Kai's POV; makes you feel kind of bad for him. Poor guy. And to think I thought I tortured him badly in the latest update for The Scent of Summer. XD
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 The Last Z Fighter 2007-12-10 . chapter 3Why such a low review-count for such a high-quality story? I'm never going to understand this site at all. Moving on. This is a very enjoybale story, and what's more I can 'hear' Kai's voice in my head when you write which is a good thing. Not to many people can pull off good first person and consistently stay true to the character. It takes a lot of work so good job.
I'm defiantly going to be watching this story more closely. Hope to see you around a bit more. |
 RadiantBeam 2007-12-01 . chapter 2AW. MY HEART.
I'm serious... this was really very sweet, and I love your characterization of Saya pre-series. It fits her nicely, and I might be reading into this too much, but it seems like she's got more than sisterly feelings for Kai at this point... I could be wrong...
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 writingisfun100 2007-11-25 . chapter 1love it!keep writing! |
 darkchild 2007-11-24 . chapter 1 Please update as soon as possible, this story is really good^_^... |
 RadiantBeam 2007-11-23 . chapter 1“…H’lo, Brother!”
You make Saya so cute and innocent in this chapter; it makes me want to hug her. You also do a wonderful job describing everything from Kai's POV; it's very nice, and it sounds just like something he'd be thinking.
I take it this is a Kai/Saya, right? I hope so. There aren't nearly enough stories for these two.
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