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| RisingWolfJ 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseAw, even though this was just a drabble I realy liked how well you related such a simple, kiddy thing to what Damien's thoughts might be. I mean... it's not like in the show they go too deep into Damien's inner thoughts, so I thought you did an awesome job making them up. I could believe he's a real person. :) ...person-demon-son of satan thin. Yeah. And that last line is so cool. I really liked this! |
| Jamra 2007-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was freakin' awesome. It touched my heart =] Hope you keep writing more South Park fanfics, I'm going to look out for you. |
| TheyKilledKenny 2007-11-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, first thing, this is definitely not "a double whammy of overall bad writing". This is superb. I know it didn't delve deeply into anything, but it just touched upon it, and that is the signature of South Park. Heaven always snowy...you know, that's a very thought-inspiring idea, I can't imagine the people in South Park wanting to live anywhere but there, so heaven for them must be snowy. Interesting for Damien to say that. Anyway, listen carefully: DO NOT STOP WRITING SOUTH PARK!! You are very good with the South Park category, and I would really like to see you do more. |
| ryu-son 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseYAY! It's adorable, just like the picture! It's Ryu-son! I LOVE YOU! |