|Reviews for The Case of the Mystery|
| Razzkat 6/14/08 . chapter 4
It symbolizes the end of our two-party system (Kirby) and Al Gore (ham), right? *sobs*
Very great ending. I laughed slash mourned especially when Peach got eaten, and when the castle blew up. Good story, ACT II! It convinced me to get a pie room of my own and a rabbit.
If you don't mind me asking...w-what was Marth's prize going to be?...
| IStalkKirby 6/13/08 . chapter 4
It had explosions. It had the afterlife. It had pie. It had flashforwards.
Therefore, that was a riveting conclusion, and despite my hatred of you and everything you stand for, I enjoyed the fic as a whole!
WRITE SOMETHING AGAIN SOON OR I SWEAR I WILL CUT YOU SO MUCH, PUNK-have a nice life!
| Razzkat 2/17/08 . chapter 3
ZOMG ACT II yay! Very good chapter! PEACH IS A REAL JERK AS THE SAVIOR OF THE MYSTERY THOUGH!1 D8
| Hoogiman 2/17/08 . chapter 3
Ya... take the constructive criticism... but sometimes awkward sentences are yay!1 I think my entire portfolio of fiction has been built on it and... yeah...
*goes to Luigi/Jigglypuff ficmaking factory*
*fave's story again*
I... I think it was Luigi that did it to impress Jigglypuff who is the evil politician's daughter!
And yay for random leopard and wolf tree branch interval I'm not intelligent enough to understand but yai?
| IStalkKirby 2/16/08 . chapter 3
Oh Luigi and Jigglypuff, you saucy pair.
| Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus 2/15/08 . chapter 3
WHAT DID YOU DO TO PEACH, HUH? WHAT DID SHE EVER DO!
Anyway, excellent chapter!
Except you had Peach get corrupted. Stupid Ike. :(
| Apacolyptic Ham 2/15/08 . chapter 3
Oh, this is gonna be a tough one to review. Not tough as in it's bad, just I'm not sure if I should give it a 4 or a 5 (5 being the highest). I'll start off with the good.
- Clever and funny
- Good plot
- Good grammar
- Intresting and new
The Not so Good
- Sometimes awkward pauses
- Sentences may sometimes be choppy
- Confusing at one point
It's still a very good story! You really should keep continuing it. Just add a little bit more meat to the bone of the sentence. Like one sentence I took as example, "They followed her into a room." What were the surroundings? Did they notice anything? What did the things look like? I'm sorry if I'm being kind of a review freak here. Just in the reviewing mood. Anyways, I either choose if it is a 4 or a 5...but I'm sorry I have to give it a 4. It's still an amazing grade! Keep up the good work and I'll check up on you!
| Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus 2/5/08 . chapter 2
Man. Pichu is so stupid. But that's why I love him the most - he's so stupid, he hurts himself.
And Zelda is suspicious... I don't trust her. The bond she shares with Ike is so touching, and I feel bad for Ike because he's being bashed a lot, and I don't think he deserves it because-
(notices video of Marth and Ike on YouTube)
WELL IT JUST SUCKS TO BE YOU, HUH IKE?
| IStalkKirby 2/5/08 . chapter 2
Awesome and cool and yeah.
| Hoogiman 2/4/08 . chapter 2
Yay this was the best story evar!1
The goodness of the short abrupt deaths... and uh... yeah... yay Peach and Fox!
And... Sonic death? Yay?
| Razzkat 2/4/08 . chapter 2
D8 Okay, that was cool, but poor Ike, and Soni-oh, well, meh, Sonic. *shrugs* Awesome chapter, ACT II! *high fives?*
| tikitikirevenge 2/4/08 . chapter 2
"THIS ISN'T ONE OF THOSE TYPICAL "THEY ALL DIE AND YEAH" FICS!"
Sonic's rabbit says otherwise...
Ah! Let go!
No, I'm sorry! Don't kill me, Mr Fluffy!
Oh the PAIN!
I'm SORRY I DOUBTED YOUR ABILITIES AS AN AUTHOR! PLEASE GET IT OFF ME!
Oh, Samus... I never got to make out with you...
| Lupe 11/28/07 . chapter 1
Peach is sexy. Amirite?
Although, I thought this fic was kinda short. Ohwell.
| joebthegreat 11/28/07 . chapter 1
This is a message from the spirit world
Dial 1-800-FIX-FOOD and learn all about the new blender we've been preparing up here!
And holy hell, I'm going to say those were some crazy random gags! Lots of sexy one line little jokes, all rolled up into something.
I'd smoke this story if only I had a printer :(
I appreciate you
| Razzkat 11/23/07 . chapter 1
ARG THE JEFF KOONS RABBITS WERE IN THE MACY'S THANKSGIVING DAY PARADE I am pretty sure. I think. Anyway, that was great...poor Snake? Or is he...NOT DEAD? But poor King Dedede, because he did not get to eat his pie. SAD TIMES.