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justmebutterfreetoo
2009-12-28 . chapter 13
911 is my bday too:)
justmebutterfreetoo
2009-12-28 . chapter 6
the llunch part is a part of sky high , tht maked me crack up, nice job
ChOcOlAtE-cOoKiEmOnStEr
2009-12-27 . chapter 18
Uwah *0* This story is so good 8D
I hope you update soon!! ^^
Sasuke is so in love with her <3
Can't wait for the next chapter :D
AND HAVE FUN ON YOUR STORY THAT'S GOING TO BE PUBLISHED INTO A MANGA! <3 What's it called? (:
ichigorukia4life
2009-12-26 . chapter 18
this fanfic is like, freaking ah-mazing!I love how it's going, I just wish Sakura would see Sasuke likes her and that she kindasortamaybe likes him too!! =]Please update soon and also, can you give me the links to those good Maximum Ride fanfics, I absolutely ah-dore Maximum Ride =]
lookin4more831
2009-12-16 . chapter 2
I was reading this story and i thought it was so good...til i realized all you did was copy Sky High. You should've made your own story. You're probably much better at writing your own stories than you are at copying other peoples.
Midnight Angel Sakura
2009-12-13 . chapter 18
Aw, this story is coming to an end soon. *sniff* But I love it and I love that you are making a sequel.
littlefreakshow
2009-12-08 . chapter 18
I love this fic so much. Its so interesting even though the storyline is kinda predictable, but at the same time unpredictable. (I know.I don't make sense.) Anyway, SASUKE IS IN LOVE WITH SAKURA~!~ Squee.

Update soon please.
ihearttoast09
2009-12-07 . chapter 18
GOD. DAMN. IT!! JUST CONFESS ALREADY! This kid, he's KILLIN' me, man.

Dude I can totally picture Naru trying ta sneak a peak and poor Sak having noo clue. She's so innocent and cute, its a wonder she hasn't been jumped already. OH WAIT- forgot about Sasuke... xD

*Sasuke gave me and “WTF?” look and I stopped. He turned around and pointed over his shoulder at his back.* -ahaha! man I can so imagine him doing this with the grumpy-est look on his face xDD Oh ho, and its gets hot and steamy with the lotion ;D

*Sasuke had changed. Now, it was like he really cared about me.* -UNDERSTATMENT OF THE DAMN YEAR. but it's okay Sak, I still effing love you like a lion(nes?) loves gazelles! (man those things look tasty...) LOLZZ and I salute poor Sakura who had to actually confess to two teenage boys that she just got her period AND explain what it is. BRAVO MY FAVORITE HEROINE! BRAVO! ahaha fucking love her... and damn they are idiots xDD

DEI! SASORI! OMFG! MY TWO FAVORITE PEOPLE IN THE ENTIRE WORLD! (can you tell how much I love them with the excessive exclamations? ~:D)

*“Have you ever thought that the Bastard was in love with you?” * -VOICE OF REASON! HALLELUJAH! NARUTO YOU ARE NOW THE NEW KAMI-SAMA!! -bows down to him and all his glory-

Ah... eventful chapter was awesome and eventful :D and OMG! I missed you :'( college apps have been eating my life, no joke. BUT! I finally got them all done today so yay! I'm so sorry I have been technically MIA/dead for the past like... 3 months Dx totally didn't mean that... but now its aall a good :D (why am I suddenly talking like an italian plumber...?)

ANYWAYS. this chap was fab-o, AS ALWAYS! So UpDaTe SoOn DaMnIt! :D and omg, you're getting yourself published?? CONGRATS MAN!! 8D

~ihearttoast09~ (wohoo!)
MissImpossible
2009-12-06 . chapter 18
Good chapter :D
katara Y.O.U.
2009-12-06 . chapter 18
the ending of this chapter scared me a little
Whats Mine Is Yours
2009-12-05 . chapter 1
aw its kinda cute how sakura's 'obsessed' with neji
xD but yeah, love the sasusaku and sasuke background

and i totally get how you dont want it to be american cause mr.hatake does sound weird even if ive done that before ;P
Whats Mine Is Yours
2009-12-05 . chapter 1
aw its kinda cute how sakura's 'obsessed' with neji
xD but yeah, love the sasusaku and sasuke background

and i totally get how you dont want it to be american cause mr.hatake does sound weird even if ive done that before ;P
Masquerade Marionette
2009-12-05 . chapter 18
Ohohoho...I'm sensing a bit of jealousy...and ew...A BJ?! Ino giving Neji a BJ?!...Nice job...
love-chan
2009-12-05 . chapter 18
i love this story :D
update soon love-chan
gianna loves SasuSaku
2009-12-05 . chapter 18
Awesome! Sequel! I love sequels!

I saw it! And I just loved where it ended! "Marry me, Bella." ... "Gasp." I heard a few audience members go, "What?! What happens next?"

Ohohoh! Me! Me! Me! I'd like some good links for Maximum Ride! I love that series! Plus, I'm just kinda reading only updates and those are limited so...yeah.

LATERS!

love,
GIANNA
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