 AmbivalentAngyl 2009-04-11 . chapter 1I like the "We were heroes, once too" line i never really thought about that in comparison to Sora. Loved it. Very insightful. |
 The Genesis Awards 2009-02-14 . chapter 1I am extraordinarily pleased to inform you that your story, Pieced Together, has been nominated for The Genesis Awards Best Crossover Category. The Genesis Awards exists to reward the authors of FFVII fanfiction that show a certain standard of grammar and formatting, relevance to canon and characterization. Your story was nominated by Illa Scriptor and passed to the judging rounds because of the quality your story possesses. On April 15th, the Shortlisting for the Genesis Awards will take place, and on June 15th the final results will be tallied and posted.
If you have any questions or comments, please visit our Fan Fiction Net Profile or The Genesis Awards forum.
Congratulations, and good luck.
Best Regards,
Sai, Co-Admin of The Genesis Awards |
 Demeter1 2008-12-04 . chapter 1This is one of those fantastic KH2/FFVII crossovers that just stick in your hand like wet gum and it'll never come out no matter how much scraping you do. And I'm glad; it's beuatiful, and I love the way the little thoughts are written in and the whole thing felt like a poem and written in a way that made me cry, just a little. Dammit, the waterworks. Beautiful piece! |
 Yokai no Miko 2008-11-13 . chapter 1Wow, this is really good and sad. I think that there needs to be more stories explaining how the final fantasy worlds wound up the way they did. |
 Fraggy-Doodles 2008-08-25 . chapter 1I have to say that I really liked the concept of 'worlds not making it and combining into one' that you used in this fic. It's not the usual 'we had lives before KH sort of cliche' and I found it to be very refreshing.
I also like everyone's characterization; especially Sora's and Yuffie's. I think if you ever find yourself without a current writting project, turning this ficlet into a multi-chaptered story could be fun. Imagine,...if somehow they found Vincent in the ruins...or someone like Vincent? Just a thought. Anyway, it was a nice little fic I'm glad I decided to read. Peace.
On a side note: There really needs to be more decently written KH universe Yuffietines. |
 MohawkFetish 2008-08-04 . chapter 1Salutations, Amanada! It's me, Nicole!
Anyways, I read this story and instantly loved it! You're fantabulous, I love your writing style! AH! :] keep it up, you've got oodles of talent. |
 ninja butterfliie 2008-06-23 . chapter 1This made my heart hurt in that really good, but super sad way. For all of them, but especially Yuffie, I think. Poor kid. D:
I love how Sora is there with them, but he acknowledges that he really isn't, because he doesn't belong to that group. And the whole thing, the nostalgic feelings and how Cloud brightens up a little when he talks about his home. All of it is just so fantastic and angsty and perfect.
I want to give them all hugs now. ;-; |
 Rawr-For-You 2008-06-06 . chapter 1Oh my gosh, not only did this story explain everything probably better than the KH creators could but also the whole Yuffie and Vincent part caused me to tear up. :3
I'm a sucker for Yuffintine |
 Da God Cane 2008-05-31 . chapter 1Oh, my god this was good. You really know your shit about Square Enix productions don't you? I am just blown away about how simple the plausibility of allowing the FFVII heros (Avalanche was made up of some of the baddest motherf-ckers of all time) to retell their life (and Dirge of Cerberus!) to sweet little naive Sora who finally learns that not everyone's story is princesses, saving best friends and bringing the light the world.
Good job at the presentation of the gritty realness of the FFVII gang (because Disney, being the pussies they are won't allow the real gangstas to tell their stories). I wanna use this concept to approach the retelling of their events in my crossover story, but I don't wanna be a biter of other peoples shit...Actually, (and I will give you mad recognition and credits for it), could I do it if not directly then indirectly from this story? Please? Sike, but for real, I can understand if you wanna keep this patented, just hit me back either way.
You gets mad faves from me on this,
P-E-A-C-E! |
 Illa Scriptor 2008-04-10 . chapter 1That... was stunning.
And extraordinarily depressing. I think you may have just turned me against Kingdom Hearts.
I mean, wow. Yuffie’s pain was so raw and tangible, and her last line of dialogue... dang, I nearly teared up. :( |
 The Walker of Dreams 2008-02-12 . chapter 1Love love love love love love love this story. A lot of loves, I know, but I read in on LJ and am really happy to find out you posted it here.
So sweet, and it sticks with you, and I love it. |
 Tails of life 2008-02-02 . chapter 1 Ive been on a massive hunt for crossovers that had kh fvvii characters remember who they were how great they were sigh it brings back so many memories i get kinda sad cause playing the game you want the world back to the kh world there in its just feels liek its wrong. But this gives like answer to it thanks for writing this piece it was really good. |
 candyandie 2008-02-01 . chapter 1oh god,
that was so amazing perfect for yuffie.
wow |
 CliffieMaster 2008-01-16 . chapter 1Absolutely bloody amazing. I love your style -- it really lends a heartbreak factor to the story, which made it above and beyond others I've read. Wonderful job! |
 BrokenAnzaran 2007-12-19 . chapter 1T.T that was beutiful |