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Reviews for: Illusion
hondagirl
2008-01-06 . chapter 1
Oh my. The ending here just about killed me. What I mean is I like this story and I like the way you write but I don't like Angelina killing herself. I dunno I'm so confussed. I want Angelina to mourn Fred but then I want her to end up with George and have a baby boy named Fred. :(I'm surprised only one other person has reviewed this story. Its quite good.
-honda
GossipGirl17
2007-11-23 . chapter 1
That was really well written - you captured how Angie was feeling v. well - v.sad
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