 Whinter 2007-11-23 . chapter 1Hey, I loved this. Very funny, great extrapolation both from the situation after Chosen, and the implied attitude of the Slayers towards Angel as the CEO from Hell. Giles' voice is spot-on. Congratulations! |
 KColl2003 2007-11-23 . chapter 1Mate, who doesn't have a fear about outside toileting?
And on a more serious note, 'Master' Slayer sounds too masculine for what is after all a female job\calling\position. I prefer Senior or Chief, but that's by the by.
Is this the first part\prequel to that new idea of yours? |