Beautifully written...you might want to think about trying to get some of your stuff published. I am older (just love magna and anime - what can I do) and have had my poetry published. So keep writing, keep everything, re-edit as you grow, but as far as I can tell you are pretty good right now. But, keep writing...would hate to lose a writer as good as you!

wahh! I love it! great poem, great end

Wow, I really like it (especially since I've read to chapter 33 hehe) ^.^ I really like it!

Beautifully done, now I wish I could find chapter 34.

-Hikari Adams

OH MY GOSH, WHERE DID YOU GET 33 AND 34 YOU MUST TELL ME

Yeah, where are chapters 33 and 34? I HAVE TO KNOW! I read chapters 1 thru 32 in two days three weeks ago, and I was so disappointed that I couldn't find chappie 33. PLEASE TELL ME!

iloved it but were did you get chapter 33-34? i've been looking everywhere!! can you plaes tell me loved the pome^^

where did you find chappie 34? 33? 32?

Wow...such a beautiful and romantic poem. I love it