Woah. O_o That was intense. But I like the way you portrayed Kakashi. :) Good job!

Awsome! I hope Kakashi does become Hokage, though I'm sure he will. Great fic!

Oh my god, that was fantastic. Your description was fantastic, and honestly, quite eerie xD amazing.

Great story. I love how Kakashi got to use his late excuse one last time.

that was raally nice
i like how he used his catchphrase as a distraction.

I love how he distracted Madara with one of his signature excuses for being late. this was a beautiful piece - well fit for my favorite character. well done!

That . . . was very cool. The second-person POV you used was a well chosen vehicle given the character and the event. It conveyed the "sense of doom" quite well! Excellent work.

Very well done. A suitably dramatic and touching piece, that really works well with Kakashi's character. I particularly loved the way he used his usual "late excuse" as a means of throwing his foe off-guard--worked excellently. Nice work on this!

intresing