Reviews for Future Travellers: Part I

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bttf4444 2008-05-08 ch 20,	abuseLoved it! Loved it! Loved it! Gee, for all his lecture to Marty about "thinking fourth dimensionally", it's like he couldn't figure out how Marty possibly could've gone back. I guess he was just so excited that his first time travel experiment worked, he wasn't thinking clearly. I can hardly wait to see how he would react to the presense of two Martys.
bttf4444 2008-05-07 ch 18,	abuseGreat chapter! I like that new twist of Biff also hitting on Jennifer! :)
twisterblake 2008-05-01 ch 16,	abusehey great chapter update soon
twisterblake 2008-05-01 ch 17,	abusehey great chapter update soon
bttf4444 2008-05-01 ch 17,	abuseWhoops! Well, it's nice to see Marty Jr punching out Biff - not long ater his grandfather did.
bttf4444 2008-05-01 ch 16,	abuseGreat chapter! I didn't think it was too short. I love how Marty Je said, "I'm walking here, I'm walking here." It sounds like he's still somewhat his old awkward self, but is learning to become more confident.
twisterblake 2008-04-30 ch 15,	abusehey great chapter update soon
bttf4444 2008-04-30 ch 15,	abuseGreat chapter! I love how Doc '55 had mistaken Marty Jr for his father. Also, yeah, good point about Marty One spotting Jennifer at the dance. You know, I myself have often thought of what Jennifer's reaction would be - about Marty dating his own mother. I think it would depend on the circumstances. She might initially become angry and confused, but I think she would come to understand the situation.
bttf4444 2008-04-28 ch 14,	abuseThis is another great chapter! Poor Marty Jr must've felt so bad, finding out that he would've been murdered.
bttf4444 2008-04-27 ch 13,	abuseIt's a great chapter! Yeah, I think Marty One and Lorraine should also show up at the diner - but they never see their younger self. I'm guessing that Marty Two and Jennifer also fall asleep in Biff's garage. Maybe, to involve Jennifer in the story a little more, have her be the one to try to get the almanac back from Biff. Marty Jr sees Biff trying to hit on her, and he manages to punch out Biff. The two finally get it back. Wow! This story will be pretty complex. After all, Marty Jr's past will probably change for him, too. Just another suggestion: When you get to the Old West part of the story, Marty Sr and Marty Jr could be Clint and John Wayne Eastwood - and maybe have Jennifer be Jennifer Holt. That's the name of a western actress. It's probably best to not interfere with what happened with George, Lorraine, and Marty One. I think Marty Sr, Marty Jr, and Jennifer should all be there to catch the bolt of lightning hit the clock tower. Anyway, great job on the story! :)
bttf4444 2008-04-16 ch 12,	abuseAnother great chapter! :) Once again, though, I think you made a little mistake. This line was in there: "The flying teens all laughed at Old Biff's reaction to his younger self." It looks that line came from your other fic, The Junction Point Of The Continuum. Otherwise, you're doing great. Keep up the good work. :)
bttf4444 2008-04-08 ch 11,	abuseGreat chapter! You made a little mistake, though. It looks like you copied and pasted some of this from The Junction Point Of The Continuum, though - and you forgot to take out this line: "At the other side of the street Scott realised who it was. “Grandma?” he asked in astonishment." You might want to fix that part. Otherwise, keep up the good work! :)
bttf4444 2008-04-04 ch 10,	abuseThis is a great chapter. Not only will Marty have to avoid being seen with his other self, but so will his son. It's just like in my story, Twins In Time. Both Marty and Calvin had to avoid letting the younger Marty see them.
twisterblake 2008-03-31 ch 9,	abusehey great chapter update soon
bttf4444 2008-03-29 ch 9,	abuseGood! I'm glad they managed to rescue Jennifer in time! I can hardly wait to read what happens next. :)

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