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james is my boi
2008-10-05
ch 7,
abuseinteresting
james is my boi
2008-10-05
ch 4,
abusei like
That-Alien-Thing
2008-10-04
ch 7,
abuseI just found this story and I really think its great! I think you should send teddy into the past and I want you to know... yes, you are PureEvil!
CrazymangoeswithHPGW
2008-09-30
ch 7,
abusePlease update soon!
Skylar Kaulitz
2008-09-22
ch 7,
abuseHey... i'll tell u now to not expect much of me... i can't write a review even if my life depended on it but i do try to review at least once in a while

now for my lame attempt at a review... *ahem* WOOHOO! Love this story, love you, and your writing style. i hope you do continue this and that more people review to help inspire you ^.^

hugs & kisses
Miss Sky
Little Miss Mischief
2008-09-15
ch 7,
abuseI really like this story! This chaper was slightly confusing, but it was good. I really really really want TEDDY to go to the past 'coz he is one of my favourite characters. GO TEDDY!

Please update really soon!

~Amber
SinsterSerpent
2008-09-14
ch 7,
abuseI have to admit-this story is hilarious and funny. Will the Marauders and Lily ever find out the truth? I hope so...I think people actually should be reviewing. But maybe they are too lazy.
Gryffindor for eva'
2008-09-03
ch 7,
abuseHey! I love your story, though did you have to make Sirius such a manwhore. I mean come on he really wasn't a player he was just handsome and he'd better not try and split Lily and Scorpius.
Duckstar
2008-09-03
ch 7,
abuseplease work on your spelling. Other than that, it's a good story!
Lolgirl
2008-08-01
ch 7,
abusePlease update!
ari dark princess
2008-07-18
ch 7,
abuseHEY! REALY REALY LIKED IT.
AS FOR SENDING SOMEONE TO THE PAST I THINK U SHOULD SEND ALL THREE ( HARRY, JAMES AND TEDDY) BACK. AND TOGETHER. AND ADD FRED WEASLY II IN THEIR GROUP. I MEAN IT WOULD B VERY INTERESTING TO HAVE THE MARUDERS, LILY EVANS, HARRY AND THE NEXT GENERATION ALL TOGETHER AT HOGWARTS. AND FRED WOULD JUST INCREASE THE FUN. ANYWAY ONE WEASLY IS MUST DONT YA THINK.
UPDATE SON!
WhensunshinewiltsIdanceinra...
2008-07-11
ch 7,
abuseUnhuh. pure evil indeed. Jee peopsies, it ain't that hard to review!

I'm sad albus was covered up by a chair! and YAY we saw rosie!

I know how you feel, i get no reviews either.
WhensunshinewiltsIdanceinra...
2008-07-11
ch 4,
abuseI feel violated. Jade, do you feel violated?

Lol
WhensunshinewiltsIdanceinra...
2008-07-11
ch 2,
abuseWriting Peter

1)make him mostly quiet and then try to be cool, but fail.

2)don't make him too stupid, it's handy to have them (meaning Remua) be kind to him sometimes, Lily as Well.

3)If you want to do something suspenseful, have peter try to get their attention after noticing something very important, but everybody blows him off in a ceperate conversation. It really fun.

Love the chapter ending.
justanothercrazybrunette
2008-07-07
ch 7,
abusethis is such a great story please continue!!
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