Ah nice story, now I want to see Princess Tutu again.

This is definately a really strange turn of events, from other stories i've read, but this is really good!

I can't wait to read what you're gonna come up with next!

PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY AND SOON! ASAP! ;3

This is one amazing piece of fanfiction, I hope you continue it soon so I can read even more of it! Great job!

Yayness

Very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.

hurry and update please!

Neko-sensei? Pure? that'll be the day. . but yeah, this is wonderful! Please, please update soon! It sounds like something the original creator of Princess Tutu would come up with, the way you tell it and all...

*turns wides eyes upon author after cliffie is read*

ah ... *dying of non-update* please ...

love it but that was a cliffy.

great story. quick question, isnt pas de deux the translation for step [pas] of [de] two [deux]? what you could be trying to say is ne deux pas, [ne _ pas is the negation of everything]. pardon me if im wrong, i havent been taking french for a long time

I love the story! Fakir and Duck are my favorite couple!

omg... To be completely honest, the mother part made me very interested in the story, cuz the mother idea is very unique

I usually read princess tutu stories that I lose interest in, but I'm starting to get interested in this one

Keep up the good work

I'm proud of you! :D

...?it was rushed?O.O hm i thought it was still goin at a normal pace-' oh vell! excellent chappie! ya did a wonderful job! really lookin foreward ta da next chappie!- good luck darlin!

-R.G.W

Hello. Good day!

Just here to introduce our Rant about...

Why Trunks&Pan (TP) SHOULD NOT be a couple and…

Why Trunks&Marron (TM) SHOULD be a couple.

TYVM. ;D

Point #1: Trunks is WAY WAY older than Pan. (over a decade age difference!) Although it is acceptable to have a slight age difference, here there is much too much of one!

Point #2: The initials (TP) stand for toilet paper. NOT Trunks&Pan. It sounds really stupid, and if you say “I luvvz TP HOMGG11!one!one1six” then you’re just saying you like love toilet paper. That’s just sad.

Point #3: Some TP fans say that Vegeta would like to have his son marrying a saiyan rather than someone a human-android like Marron. But no, Vegeta would have to be related to his life-long rival Goku! Whereas if Trunks marries Marron, Vegeta would be related to the android he couldn’t beat, which is not necessarily a bad thing.

Point #4: Pan sucks $$. Excuse my french.

Point #5: Trunks is WAY WAY older than Pan. Uh, I think I already mentioned that…but it is a very important point! TP fans sometimes make Pan’s age older, but to do that you would have to re-age everyone, unless you think Gohan had her at age, like, 13? Fanfictions totally ruin the ages. I mean, honestly! Pan 16. Bra 16. Marron 17. Trunks 17. Goten 17. WTF is wrong with you people!

BTW, this is constructive criticism.

We are cynical fanfiction reviewers.

Take it to heart.

You were right about the end a bit rushed but overalla great chapter and a better pace. I'm enjoying a lot so far, especially since Princess Tutu was the anime that first got me watching anime. It's good that the plot of your version is getting as twisted as the original anime's. Good work!