cool you should make about 3-6 more chapters for the next baby and serena'a condition also thats a theory that i think that will work out perfectly. Thanx

aw, that was amazing! Loved it!
GREAT story!

Wow, casi lloro con el final y es que en relidad hiciste un muy buen trabajo con la carta que Endymion le manda a Darien.
La explicación del cambio de futuro es muy buena, yo también me pregunté porque no hicieron nada para prevenir lo que sucedería si es que sabísn lo que pesaría con la Black Moon Family. He leído historias que tratan de dar una explicación, incluida la de ser estoicos y dejar suceder lo que tenga que pasar, lo cual es hasta cierto punto aceptable por eso de resguardar el futuro y bla, bla..., pero tu punto de que Darien o Endymion en este caso no se hubiera quedado atado de manos es muy cierto y se acerca mas a la realidad del personaje. Lo único que no me gustó fue la idea de Rei como lider, se que es la mejor amiga de Serena y todo eso, pero en realidad me gusta que Mina sea la lider del grupo.

En fin, gracias por tu fic.

OMG that was so nice! I good way to end an awesome story! Way to go!

Sorry I have an account on fan i just don't feel like logging on... i just wanted to say that Serenity of crystal tokyo is from the 30th century. I don't really care for this story though its to soon for the main character to die don't you think?
Michessiah

P.S Sorry I'm rude to everyone lol

hi, just wanted to say I found this story so heartfelt and it had my in tears because I too know what it is like to lose someone you love. Very well written (or should I say translated)it doesn't lose the essence of the story throughtout. Wonderful!

I just read the whole story there, I really enjoyed it!!

Excellent job. It was well written but I did see a few typos. I hope to read more soon.

i am so happy that you finally up dated but i am so sad that it ended. it was a wonderful story

this story is amazing. and you haven't made any big mistakes yet.
But please please update soon.

I LOVE IT! PLEASE PUT UP THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! I AM LITERALLY DYING OF WAITING!

WOW!

I love your story and hope you will update very soon!

I love love love story!

Yay! A new chapter. I hope that you can forgive me. I know that it has been awhile. I think I will add this to my alert, like I thought I did.

That way when you update, I won't be behind.

I loved the chapter. It was good.

I'm glad that they have Serena back. I wonder why nothing happened. I hope that she comes back.

Please update soon. I love this story!

Until then...

I'm so sorry. I didn't know that you updated this.

I liked the new chapter. Wow, that was a good twist.

I was hoping that Serena would come back after Destiny talked with her sister Death.

I can't wait to find out what will happen next.

Please update soon. I love this story!

Until then...