Wow, i really like this story, this one's going on my favorites list _

I liked this story. It was really really...I don't know, it kinda borders on moving. It was written magnificently. Great job.

I think is was so kawaii and prodigious! YAY! YOU MENTIONED YAMA IN IT!

neat. very unusual and refreshing, and ur right hand holding is the only thing they can't mess up...

You're right; his dubbed name is Malcolm. I don't understand why you just kept putting down your story. It's very nice and it has a better plot than most digimon stories out there. I liked it very much. But I have a question that I would like an answer too. If you don't think it has a plot and you don't hreally like the way it ended, then why did you post it? Please continue writing. I really liked this piece.

Ah...true, true. It's a great story. Very realistic. It's like if the show had stayed to see the parents reaction then something very similar to this might have been what Matt's and Tk's parents were thinking. Tres bon! Keepwriting! Ttyl Byez!

great story! I heard his Japanese name was Masaharu so I guess that explains the name Malcom. cya!

I liked it, nice job! - raine

Kewl

Hey, that was pretty good. Sounds like something that would happen. J