Good short story when you have five minutes to spare, liked the point of view.

The author's note provides a brief sense of humor in an otherwise depressing fic. It's nice that you made a fic from the adjutant's point of view. Good work!

The cake recipes are a lie.

Yay! That was awesome! Good job.

I've been wanting to read and/or write a story concerning the Adjutant and suffice to say, this story catered to the former aspiration excellently. The adjutant remains its usual factual self yet feels in character, at least as far as the parameters of an AI allow.

The only real criticism I can give is that the focus of the story in terms of character could be taken as being out of place at times. The commander goes through his own emotional journey, at times eclipsing the Adjutant. Nothing major, but still noticable.

Still, good job just the same.

A very interesting look at a Terran loss and the interaction between the adjutant and the commander. I like it.

I really don't have any criticism for this one, everything looks clean and covers the plot. Excellent writing style and grip, once I got to reading I could not stop until I hit the end.

Keep 'em coming, comrade.