This is gorgeous. I have to fave it. My fangirliness compels me! Great work!

Very nice, love the context of this story.

my gosh my california buddy! That was friggin swet.Sad but awsome. Poor Axel and Roxas, huh? Well keep writing-you got skillz!

Geez, I always read these things too damn late so I will depart from your work with just one word:
Lovely.
=]

I love all the detail you use in your writing, there's so much emotion in it, and... Heh, I love the first section. x]

(*is RoxyOblivion from dA*)