 AGENT Kuma-chan 7/7/08 . chapter 1…Hinata would still love Naruto anyways.
...That line just wrapped up the drabble perfectly...
Especially considering Naruto's worries... |
 ish.the.abstract 7/5/08 . chapter 1this is good...it's great how you manage to tell a freaking story in a few sentences then proceed to let your readers' imagination work on the rest
ish |
 vwaterlily 4/19/08 . chapter 1Aw! Cute, simple, short, sweet! Love it! |
 red.masenko 2/10/08 . chapter 1Poor Naruto. So much shit is taken out of him. He's awsome!
And Hinatas dads stare could make sasuke cry. ahaha!
awsome story!
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 Reyka 1/26/08 . chapter 1 I'd really like to see what actually happens at the dinner. |
 Shins Lighter 1/17/08 . chapter 1I think Konaha's Loudest Ninja should totally count as a title. Whats the good of being the loudest if no one recognizes you for it? (on this I speak from the heart... you don't know how many times I've been voted most talkative.)
And ofcourse Hinata would still adore him, cause she's too sweet to hate him! |
 Robina 1/12/08 . chapter 1Yeah, you are definatly a new favorite author. Poor Naruto! He needs someone like Hinata! She's good for him. Good luck with her family though... |
 Chibi Shika 12/2/07 . chapter 1aw! that was soo cute! i really like your stories, they're great! |
 GabbyXD 11/29/07 . chapter 1 lol
i know youd never do it,
but the first few lines i thought it was a NejiHina
XD anyway, another wonderful ficcy by one of my fav authors
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(write more oneshots plz!) |
 Your Pet Peeve 11/26/07 . chapter 1XD That was adorable, JayleeJ!
I bet that Sasuke would cry at Hiashi's glare too! XD
-Chibi Shino |
 cardcaptor eternity 11/23/07 . chapter 1cute. happy late thanksgiving. XP |