You know, it was nice to see the Kazekage portrayed as a kind father. I liked it. I don't really get tired of the Shikamaru/Temari thing either. Keep it up.

Joe Asha'man

Watch your spelling and Gaara never sleeps because of the One-Tail Shukaku. I'm only half way through the first chapter but besides those things it's great!

ohmygod. that was adorable! so cute(:

Ok, a little sappy, but a decent chapter all the same. Keep them coming.

Joe Asha'man

it was great liked it a lot :) have a great weekend!!

aw that was so cute pleaz continue
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Aw, that's a little more uplifting than the Gaara story I just read. Perfect.


Joe Asha'man

Again, this was very sweet! *w* I especially liked Temari's reaction with the ice-cream. Like a little kid, as you said!

Can't wait for the next one ^^

Aw! Your ShikaTema always put a smile in my face! This was so cute! Even though it was mostly dialogue (especially in the beginning) I loved it nevertheless! ^w^

Moving on to the next one!

ah! i love it so much!
you are so brilliant!

Oraio!XD m'arese polu!

Sorry for the delay! I didn't enter my e-mail account a while!
I loved this fic though! Since i could read it in dA! here's a fave!

Heh heh, ok I'll spare you a review. To be honest, I'm glad this one wasn't a lemon. I kind of don't really prefer them, so this was a nice change. The story really seemed to flow in this one, and I liked the references to Shippuden. It's got kind of a weight of continuity thing going for it.

Anyways yeah... this might be my favorite one so far.

Joe Asha'man

ps Saying "Asuma's brat" was just plain funny.

i love it!
shikatema love!
continue!

I spare you a review. That was awesome. lol, Was that good enough?