Grlnagh!

Now that we are finally starting to get some answers on all of this it stops.

I knew this wasn't finished from the beginning, I just didn't expect it to 'end' at the worst cliffhanger at this moment.

Really, I have no clue what's going on. But it was a real interesting reading experience and I definately want to see how this ends. And why it's named like this. I really wasn't expecting this kind of story in the beginning, even tough part of the genre is Drama.

If you decide to continue this at some point, I will definately continue reading.

Glad to see a few more chapters after all these years! I never gave up! Don't leave us hangin' we're almost there!

Hello, and thank you for taking the time to read this,

I found this fic today and am stunned. Your word choice has added depths to the Force that makes me see thier anime portrayals as lacking now. I have become fond of Ginyu and Burter. you make Recoome intelligent in his own way and he raises the status of the other Force members. Zarbon, brilliant. Everyone feels so legit and real. I empathise with the oc's such as the doctors. Apple was believable before he'd said a word. I really feel as though I am reading a published book.

The only thing I might warn against, though it is a rare occurance, is your use of exclamation points and perhaps the word drama. It might just be personal dislike of those items. But I find their placement too closely used or not the most functional tool in some instances. I would quote from examples, but its really no big. Just felt I should nitpick something. /feels guilty

I would also like to add that I find the fact that you started this fic in 2001, and have kept it going, so inspiring and respectable. You write this for us and not just for reviews. You believe in the story and havn't given up on it or become consumed fully by life matters.

Your writting style helps greatly to immerse the reader. The parts I cherish most of the fic is the dialogue and multiple perspectives. Its enough to make the character say what is need by the plot as a tool and perfect as to the atmosphere and unique to the characters. You have pulled these off very nicely. I feel rewarded reading this. Knowing that you have not forgotten any plot elements, that the crystals weren't forgotten. Because the characters CARE about what is happening around them, I do to, and I care because of this in return about them. I can even empathise with Freiza's state of distress.

For 10 years you have created this epic. I do not think I have found another author as dedicated, nor a fic as determined to LIVE.

Thank you/ Sincerely,

A fan who respects YOU

WOW O_O Just finished reading all of this, and I'm in love. I need moar! I'm dying to see what happens next. Please update soon!

You're sounding a tad vexed, don't force yourself. But this chapter is good, I'm also thinking Frieza is being a tad complient, I'd figure he'd sooner sacrifice all his minions. I'm interested in where this is going.

Oh heck yeah. :D (Welcome back!) Things are really heating up now!

One question with the plot, couldn't they leave the planet to avoid destruction? This is one thing that never seems to get explained. Otherwise great, I'd like to see more of Frieza for some reason. Anyways, see you in a month.

-cackles- Well done, Ginyu.

(Don't worry, I won't say anything :D)

Not bad.

This one seems better than the last, better written. I like that your drawing out Guldo's character more, seems he usually gets railroaded in ginyu stories. I wanted to read that Freiza/Ginyu conversation, perhaps next time.

Ah... I think I have a notion of what's going on...

I'm really terrible at critiquing, so I'll just say thank you for sticking with this story! :3

I feel hesitant to write any critism, not that that this chapter is bad or anything. I feel the narative skips around too much, but it's more a matter of choice rather than good or bad. I also wonder why you didn't cut it down the middle and make it into two chaps? I liked reading the 'ginyu in lock up' part most, seemed very vivid. Overall I'm impressed with this chapter, it seems you've picked up your groove well enough despite your 4 year hiatus, the question is whether or not you can stick to it? Good luck!

..oh my god I thought this story was dead.

that being said, I am incredibly happy that you've written another chapter, and (all things considered) feel it prudent to apologize for being a stupid little punk.

I spotted a few basic typos, but your representation of Ginyu's descent into madness pretty much makes up for those. I loved Zarbon braiding Jeice's hair, it was sweet.

Once again, thanks for the update, and I look forward to seeing Reading Bedtime Stories reach its deserved conclusion.

Oh, wow. I can't believe you've picked this up again. It's like a dream come true! Anyway, on to the review. I thought the hair-braiding scene with Jeice and Zarbon was touching, and seeing Ginyu in such a sorry state tugged at the ol' heartstrings a bit. I feel like all those years spent occasionally checking in on this fic was worth it. :3

If there is something worse than bad fanfiction, its writing good fanfiction and never finishing! Why? This was great, and then you just quit, whatever. Its not like your ever gonna read this.