WOW! You really dont speak english? In that case, this was an amazing little fic, and anyone who says different are just unhappy that they cannot speak (or write) another language than their first. :)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Considering English isn't your first language, I think you did a wonderful job with it. MUCH better than I would do if I tried to write in a different language, anyway.

naughty Snape... and the others, oh jeez... you know, for someone who doesn't speak English, you do agreat job writing it. there were some twinges in word usage, but it was really quite good. I'm impressed! keep writing! I liked your story quite the bit.

I liked it. It was, I admit, a little weird with the plot, but hey all writer's are a little weird with their plots at some point. I personally do not think that the "pixie" person should insult you because she made many spelling/grammatical errors in her review alone! I mean she is a hypocrite PLUS you SAID you're not very good at english, so it warned people to read it at their own discretion. Personally I believe those people reviewed just to be rude and I do not find that fair to any author, especially one that worked ** a fic in English for god's sake! English is such a hard language to learn, I mean I was born speaking english and even "I" had trouble with some pronunciations and words. I liked the story though as I said the plot was a little weird with what exactly was occuring. Your english is actually quite good, I must say. Anyway, don't take the rude reviews seriously and I expect to see another English story soon. :) .

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Hello,

I just wanted to tell you that your English is very good. I did spot a few errors but you sounded touchy about it in your summary. If you would like, I could beta-read your English fics.

Thanks Kaheira

That was horrendous.

That has got to be one of the hardest stories i've ever read...i had no idea what was going on. The storyline sounds like it might have potential but i seriously suggest that you either re-write it or get a Beta.

Do something at least.

For the love of Merlin, get a beta PLEASE! I could only JUST about read it, it would have been funny but that was so awefully written. the concept it sound kiddo but, hell even my friend's five year old writes in more coherant sentances than you, read threw your stuff befor you post, if it dosn't make sence to you then it wont make sence to us. I surgest pulling this and re-writeing it ok.
I dont uselly give negative review's, but this is the first time I've ever flammed a story, I'm sorry, but their you go!
Pixie!
xox

That was hillarious! But could you please place quotation marks everytime someone speaks? For example:

"What?" She smirked, "Oh, but I think we can... etc."

It's a lot less confusing if you do that.

im confused...

That made absolutely no sense what so ever.