All the 'you' s are suppossed to be 'she' or 'shes'

Aww, poor Andi, update soon please! Thanks!

good story so update soon and keep writing its great.

I love it! Update soon! But, is their son's middle name James or CHristopher? At first you had said James, but you slipped Chirstopher in. So which is it? Also, could you read my story Blissful Dreaming and give your opinion? Thanks!
-BellaCullen2312

I need to re-read this story along iwth several others a lot of these updates dont make sense anymore. Good chapter though.

please update soon

Keep this up, please don't kill Andi. She is a great character of yours.

Good idea for a story. A few things tho. Everything seems to be one giant sentence. Run on sentences as there called. Improper punctuations. Some bad grammar and not letting the readers know hows speaking. And having the reader as Andi is kinda weird. Especially since I'm a guy. Other than that it's pretty good. Keep it up. I stopped at chapter two. I can't stand this writing format. Sorry.

Great chapter! I hope you update soon!!

Dirt Rider

I loved that chapter. Sweet, but what's wrong with andi hm...?

interesting but here is a question how the ** would wormtail have a child considering he spent pretty much all his time after school as a rat

Good one. Funny, spawn. Get the next one up soon.

Pretty quick updates, two days in a row! Good story! Sorry for not reviewing last chapter, I got side tracked. Keep up the good work!

Dirt Rider

Evil Person! I can't wait for more!

That chapter didn't help my eye twitch I think it made it worse.