Reviews for Batman and Robin: How you remind me

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BlueStar33 2008-07-24 ch 2,	abusei like it
ceilidh-kay 2008-07-18 ch 2,	abuseOh man!! I know how the college thing goes, but I really hope you update soon!! And Please happy ending if you're gonna do a romance, I just watched The Dark Knight and I could really use that.
Lorendiac 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuseI have no problem with the basic concept that in your personal version of the old Batman movies' continuity, Batman has a "secret daughter" who's now turning up on his doorstep unexpectedly. I don't even object to Dick not having had a clue there was such a person until he heard her calling Bruce "Dad." (It's kind of funny, actually.) With most people, I'd think it was downright crazy for a man to become legal guardian of an orphan (Dick), and take the guy into his home, WITHOUT bothering to mention, "By the way, I already have one biological child of my own, and you're bound to meet her sooner or later." But Bruce Wayne is so uptight about keeping secrets that it's fairly plausible that he never got around to "opening up" about his "secret daughter" until she spilled the beans herself. I do wonder what you're planning to do with her, now that she's here at Wayne Manor. I can think of several possibilities! I hope you'll continue this story soon (I see that so far it only has two chapters, and I've only read the first one, but plan to move on to the second after I post this review). Now for the Obligatory Nitpicking: This chapter has a lot of typographical errors and it would be a good idea to fix them. For instance, I'll quote a few lines from near the beginning: * “Bruce?” He asked “Yes?” Bruce asked looking up “I need a car.” Dick said “No.” Bruce replied * Frankly, the punctuation there needs some serious work. Here's how it should have gone: “Bruce?” he asked. “Yes?” Bruce asked, looking up. “I need a car,” Dick said. “No,” Bruce replied. Similar mistakes occur all through this chapter.
eris-evans 2008-05-07 ch 2,	abuseIt's amazing please continue
Kemowitch92 2008-04-01 ch 2,	abuseyou are a great author so PLZ update!
Mrs. Joe Jonas DJ DANGA 2008-03-28 ch 2,	abuseKEEP GOING!
lilskigrl72 2008-03-22 ch 2,	abuseoh snap that was good. but one question...im dumb and dont know and have to ask...how old is everyone here. very very good story please post more soon please
BlueChic 2008-03-21 ch 2,	abusePlease update soon!
Cuban Pirate Princess 2008-03-18 ch 2,	abusehey great chapter looking forward to more
Alexandra'Alex'Ryan 2008-03-18 ch 2,	abuseCool! Great Story so far! But PLEASE! Update soon!
Padme4000 2008-03-18 ch 2,	abusei really like this
Cuban Pirate Princess 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abusepleasee update so far so good please continue
riley 2008-01-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseany chance of you writing more soon? please?? it's pretty good so far
sarah 2007-11-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseplease post more lol It's a really good start.
BlueChic 2007-11-23 ch 1,	abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLUS IS THERE GOING TO BE SOME VICTORIA AND DICK LOVE ? PLEASE LET THERE BE!

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