awesome sotry plrsdr update asap it was an honor to read this story please keep on writing

Just wondering what is a onna. Man that probably sounded stupid.

Please update already this is a good story also have you read my new story well newest one I now have three haha well ones a one-shot.

I keep meaning to review but I'm lazy anyway I updated my story in case you didn't know and I prefer short chapters that don't take along time to update to long chapters that take forever to update and awesome chapter.

cool chapter!

what was that at the end when Kakashi grabs his hand?

intedresting...

kyuu out!

keep going

Very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.

This is an awesome story I can't wait to see how everybody fights also UPDATE ALL READY I'VE ONLY HAD MY STORY FOR A MONTH AND HAVE SEVEN CHAPTERS I HAVE TO WAIT A WEEK FOR THE NEXT ONE BUT THATS BESIDE THE POINT SO UPDATE PLEASE.

That was great!

Cant wait for more!

Interesting, but question are they going to meet the leaf team? Anyways please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chapter XD!

Very good fic. I'm enjoying it and look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. Forgive me if my reviews are always the same words. I don't know how to do reviews, so if I like the fic or chapter, I just say so.

more this is really good

Nice! Can't wait to read the next chapter, please update as soon as you can XD!

I like this story. It is really good. Although it wouldn't hurt to go over your writing, looking for grammer mistakes. I am merely making a suggestion to make your story better. Update as soon as possible.

-Michael