I love how you creat your own characters and weave them in seamlessly with characters I know so well. You have done your homework too. Not too many people have read operation zero. Excited for your books to be published!

You really keep em coming back for more with this one. You also do us the service of filling in the blanks (so to speak). Although I love your writing I have to be honest I wasn't to thrilled with the ending, it left me longing for more...but that's just me. I personally felt that you focused so much on details like what the characters were wearing, there backgrounds or rehashing of information we (as a reader) already know...that you didn't give as much character progression to each person in the story. But, if your weren't going for character progression in this story...then it fits. Also, I have to say it was a bit uncomfortable to see Heero so vunerable and virtually helpless. Although, uncomfortable as it was, it was quite interesting as well. Again you were able to make such a drastic change and make it believeable...bravo! But all and all your story was very well written. I've said it before and I'll say it again...you truly have a beautiful gift.

Okay, I really hadn't meant to review this until the end, but for some reason I can't seem to not be reminded of "Harry Potter" when I read this. Hm... why _is_ that? Maybe I've been reading too much OOtP lately...or maybe it's just because Mandred reminds me of Sirius, or maybe Lupin. Ah, well.
I also wanted to comment on the puppy. How adorable! I have a labrodor, although mine's yellow. What's Heero going to name it, I wonder?
Anyway, great job with this so far! I've read "Red Viper" and "Search and Seizure" already, and was quite interested in 'meeting' Mandred. I was a little suspicious of him at first, like Duo was...just claiming Heero like that. But great job with this, it's very unique! I'll review again at when I've finished reading this, and maybe before then.
Andi ()

I read this fic a long time ago on some website,

but couldn't find it again... I was thrilled to

find on ff.net!

:] Just popped into say that I loved this and you

should really write more! :) :) :) :)

Hey again! Omg I love that story! That was soo good! I loved the realasionship with Heero and Mandred! It was so cool! _ Your like a genius! You came up with all that Alfarian stuff on your own? Damn! _ I cant wait to read the fic that follows up on Heero and Relena! _ I was hoping that you had done something like that, I was so happy when I read your A/N at the end of the last chappie!

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I LOVED THIS STORY! It was brilliant! AWESOME JOB! _

Aw..poor Melanie...

Aw!

PUPPY! I miss my black lab... :( We got our black lab when it was a puppy and kept it for like..2 or 3 months and than my dad just rid of it cuz he said it peed and barked too much..and blah...Aww..I miss her! :(

OH! And I love this story! _ It's AWESOME! I just had to review for this chappie cuz I love labs.. _ *Goes to next chapter*

Two words...LOVED IT! sry I didnt review after every chapter, but I just had to read it all through. Mandred's Trial was very funny and great punishment so inventive :) I'll look forward to a Afterward if you do write one. The books you write are they about Alfarian world and all that? It great, Im intrested in all the other worlds and the Alfarinan world. I also Im wondering how Kyra and Coran are human yet involved in the alfarian world if alfarian are suppose to not make themselves know to outworlds and such. Well anyways you always write great cant wait to read more of your great writing!

always a fan

Kiwi

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the eighteenthchapter is my favorite!i love your fic! i want to read the next chapter too so you better write it or i will get mad!

*Applause* I loved Mandred's Speeches! hehe :)

Don't worry. I totally understand about the comedy and seriousness thing. I have a major problem with that in my own fics. So I gave up on that and switched to all humor!

Yay! Thanks for posting this - why did you cut out the specifics of The Remedy? But of course I can't complain. _ Anyway, please please PLEASE post the afterward with 1xR - I always thought that that was so sweet.

Wonderful story! Loved the interaction between the characters, and the trial. Your descriptions of your original characters enabled me to visualize them easily. Cannot wait for you to continue this - you will wont you?

kmf

really good, kid. It really has a great background. So far I am understanding everything perfectly. Usually something is left out of a story or something happpens that makes absolutely no sense, but i haven't run into that with this story. I really like the new characters, you did a good job showing their personality rather than rambling on for pages about what they're like email me or im me sometime, you know my screen name. now anyways heh heh.