 MeDeA1 9/1/01 . chapter 1hmmm...the beginning sounds oddly like the princess diaries...anyways, please make your stories longer next time, and include the hp characters! (this is the harry potter section after all) i suppose it would be interesting to see what happens, but could ya include more than just shopping and being a princess and such? dont get me wrong, this is definately not a flame, i dont do that. just a little constructive criticism. Try a little harder, there's a good author in there somewhere :) |