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| Me 2007-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's illegal, but cute. I like the structure. You realize that it has to be very good for me to ignore the slight 'Sugar pledged to end that' of it. But really, I like the poetry kick thing. Hope to see more! P.S. This is Padfoot, in case you can't tell. |
| XxEviexX 2007-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this!! I like that fact that it didn't rhyme, because poems like that are awesome!! (but maybe that's just cuz all my rhyming poems sound really corny... lol. HLA PS. I'm faving this!! |
| ckontowderdon32 2007-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseToo lazy to log in. X} Yay, an Arty Fowl poem! Very rare, those are. :) It wasn't bad, but I'm a bit confused as to how the poem is supposed to look because I don't think you fixed the formatting of the poem...unless that's how it's actually supposed to look? But yeah, okay, I think I'm not TOO enthusiastic about it especially because of the pairing. Well, actually, the lack of one. I'm not quite sure who this is with Arty...assuming then that it IS Arty. Might wanna make that a bit clearer somehow... But still, not bad. I guess I'm just a bit weary of tattered, cliched Arty pairings these days. So *applause* -ckontowderdon32 |
| Alistriona 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseI GIVE YOU ONE HUNDRED COOKIES! I love your poetry, Prongs. Especialy that one you wrote in Japanese the other day. |