FINALLY! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I wanna know what Djaq says! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Aww! It's so sweet - such a deep chat but they can't see or hold each other. What's she going to say? Please update as soon as possible!

LOve, PIg

YAY! HE TOLD HER! WHAT DOES SHE SAY/DO IN RESPONSE? I WANNA KNOW!

This is really sweet.

This is really sweet - WillDjaq all the way! :D

You are definitely using some quite nice sophisticated vocab, so congrats on that. Just one point: I think by "reminents" you may mean "remnants". :D

But ignore this fool, if you so wish. Many do. :D

Watching eagerly to see where it goes. Long Live Fluff!

Love, Pig

I again have only one word to say...AW! I love it!

Nice to see a fellow Will-Djaq supporter! Some say it's boring, but I think it can be just as intense ans twice as sweet as Djaq-Allan.

I like this. It's quite cute and the description is nice but perhaps could be improved upon, if that's what you really want to practise and improve. I recommend using the ONline Thesaurus - there's a plethora of enthralling and intriguing words on there, to much augment your lexicon! ;D

You guessed it. I'm addicted to odd words. :D

But if you really want to increase your descriptive skills, I think you'll find a Thesaurus really useful - there'll be other ways of saying something that you hadn't considered and an wide vocabulary makes for an interesting read. :D

Like it a lot, and curious to see how it continues.

Love,

Pig.

not bad...i know sometimes short chapters usually have the better cliffies...Keep up the good work...

update, this is really good.

Ah!

I love Will/Djaq! This is a great premise for a story-especially a Will/Djaq. I'm not really sure that your description of the new camp is the way it really is (in the episodes there seems to be a back and front entrance) but I'm willing to overlook that and pretend for a really good story! Please update soon! (As you can probably tell, I'm dying for some WD!)

-leko

I love Will/Djaq! Poor Djaq...Poor Will when ever Djaq gets out...TELL ME HE GETS HER OUT!

Seems like a really good story. I like it, and I LOVE WD! I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon!