 Cherry Seraphym 11/28/01 . chapter 1Truly great things are fermented in time. This took you a long time to write, and it does show. But it's brilliant, it's wonderful, powerful, deep. Your writing is amazing. The wording of this fic...the nuances...everything was in the right place, in a two dimensional way, and yet, it's so real, so haunting, so three dimensional. It's defiant. As is Ken, one of the most torturous Digimon characters to play with, in my mind. Well done! |
 Catherine1 9/2/01 . chapter 1Wow, this was a really great look into the mind of Ken. You got his voice down excellently. The whole song metaphor was really moving and it really makes you hope that he will be able to find peace as well. When I first started reading this, I thought it would be about the dark spore and such, but to have it be about the media and his parents pushing him was a wonderfully unexpected twist. Great job. |