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| angeliena 2008-02-12 ch 1,  | abuseOh god this is good!! Andrey and Jack bold now what will happand if she dosten tell what Jack needs. what will Jack do? |
| The Stranger In The Mist 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was tense. I loved how you played into Jack's POV about how he doesn't enjoy it, but some part of him might. I also loved the fear he had that was kind of underneath the whole interrogation and how he hated her being afraid of him. The best, however, was the final mention of how he knew what it was like to sleep with the enemy (Nina). Double kudos! - S.A. Kris |
| xxhopexx 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseOMG that was amazing! I loved the way you wrote Jack's thoughts into it Please tell me you're writing more! |