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| RuByMoOn17 2008-03-09 ch 4,  | abuselovely ^^ |
| CaT70 2008-02-29 ch 4, | abuseaw!! that was so sweet! i like the end, though lemons always do add that bit of zest to a story X3 i think it worked well this way, though a one shot would have worked too. with these short 4 parts, you make the reader want to pull their hair out because they want more and they want it now. i like it ;) all in all, good fic! write more soon?? :) |
| RuByMoOn17 2008-02-09 ch 3, | abuseI feel so bad for both of them |
| CaT70 2008-02-05 ch 3, | abuseso sad! they're both way too dense for they're own good. if one of them would just come out and say how they really feel there would be no misunderstandings, but where would the fun be in that? :) i like it, a lot. your characterization is good, along with getting how the different characters talk right. i'm excited to see what happens next ^_^ |
| DracoDormiens7 2008-02-04 ch 3, | abuseAw. Emo-ness. Please update soon! |
| DracoDormiens7 2008-01-27 ch 2, | abuseHey! Much love for this. Please update soon! |
| XxTypoMasterxX 2007-12-18 ch 2, | abusenice story so far =D KEEP GOIN! |
| Kuroi Tamashi 2007-12-17 ch 2, | abuseI so love violent!Ran! he's da greatest x3 Poor Yohji, he's attempt totally backfired ^^ Read ya at the next =3 |
| C Elise 2007-12-17 ch 2, | abuseStupid youji! |
| RuByMoOn17 2007-12-17 ch 2, | abuseaw...ran-kins |
| chi no hana 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI SWON FOR YOU(r) BEAUTIFUL (fic)! This is really sweet... seeing as i haven't been here for a while, this is a very nice fic to wake up to! XD good job! |
| Kuroi Tamashi 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abusewaa!! this is great, I can't wait for next chapter, and I bet Yohji can't either XD This story sounds promising, I hope you can update soon ^^ ♥ ~ akuma |