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Reviews for: Almost Home
firebirdgirl
2008-03-04 . chapter 3
Just read it, it is great! Happy writing!
Bineshii
2008-02-25 . chapter 3
I read this on Triaxian Silk and it is enchanting.
DinahD
2007-12-04 . chapter 3
This was a very satisfying ending to your story. I wish we'd learned a little bit more about the people who created the device, but I guess some things are just meant to remain a mystery.

I'm glad that T'Pol was able to convince Trip that he was being used, but I'm not sure he's completely convinced of her feelings for him. He's just coming off a situation where he was being manipulated by an alien race. He knows from past experience that T'Pol is interested in him one day and then pushes him away the next. I hope you do a follow up. How does their relationship proceed from this point? Good job!
DinahD
2007-12-03 . chapter 2
Poor Trip. He finally finds a little happiness, only to discover that he's just being manipulated. As if things weren't hard enough already for him with the baby's death and T'Pol isolating herself. T'Pol is going to have to work hard to regain his trust. Good job!
Drogna
2007-11-28 . chapter 3
Loved it all. Nicely written and some real soul to this piece. I just would have liked to see more of T'Pol at the end, but actually it's still a great ending.
Bineshii
2007-11-28 . chapter 1
This story about a found buoy two hundred years old and puts Trip into a dream of 1911, is intriguing. And the angsty conversation between Trip and T'Pol is good. Looking forward to more.
Vulcan Commando
2007-11-24 . chapter 3
A great read, I hope there's more to come.
2Distracted
2007-11-24 . chapter 3
Very satisfying. I enjoyed it a lot.
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