I think it'd be funny if you ended with Jade actually reading this from a hitory book or something. I think he'd be pretty amused by it. xD I like the Malkuth Emperor part. Well, I enjoy the prospect of Jade and Necromancer in the same sentence, in general. (heart)

wow. That's great use of language to instill fear and repulsion in the mind of the reader. Much as I love Jade x3, I can keep him apart from this idea. The use of italics is elementary to the form of your text so good going. It's kind of gruesome, so I shy away from it, but hey, I read it and so there you go. ^^