 johnny-B-reading 2008-03-08 . chapter 25Let Me Clarify:
This is a FICTIONAL story inclusive of FICTIONAL characters. Any comments on virtually any subject, can, and most likely will be, a little obtuse. This type of writing adds so much in the form of relating one character's emotional feeling's about another character or turn of events in the story. Using any word as a "pejorative", especially in a FICTIONAL story, should never be construed as a writers sly way of inserting their personal views in the hopes of "changing someone's mind". That is totally absurd.
This story and author are VERY DESERVING of a complimentary review, in my opinion. It is a shame that some readers are so insecure about some of their own views and stances taken on certain subjects, that they would lash out at a fictional authors story.
That also, Limaccia, is absurd.
And this is a COMMENT on your NONFICTIONAL REVIEW, which your review should have been saved for a radio talk show. Call Howard Stern. My comment on YOUR review is no more abusive than YOUR assertation of this story. I felt that other readers should have the opporyunity to have it bought to light and reminded that this IS fiction. |
 ILUVHOUSE 2008-03-08 . chapter 27I would love to see more!
Sequel maybe?
I loved it! |
 Nadrek 2008-03-08 . chapter 27Hm... overall, a good story, though I have little interest in Greg's family. |
 Nadrek 2008-03-08 . chapter 26Now, where does Allison sleep tonight? |
 Nadrek 2008-03-08 . chapter 22And the door is left unlocked AGAIN? Personally, I would have ordered John to leave and then escalated force from there,. But that's me. |
 Nadrek 2008-03-08 . chapter 18Wilson set himself and Cuddy up for picture being taken of them... and House is far, far more dangerous than Wilson is... particularly if Allison is willing to use her actually somewhat formidable acting skills to help. |
 Nadrek 2008-03-08 . chapter 17I'm disappointed - neither one of them asked "Why would Cuddy need an oncologist in an emergency?" |
 Nadrek 2008-03-08 . chapter 16"My, House, you've changed" - excellent line for Wilson. |
 Nadrek 2008-03-08 . chapter 15Well, Allison missed a good chance for a "thing" comment or two. |
 Nadrek 2008-03-08 . chapter 14Overall, a good job with Cameron. |
 Nadrek 2008-03-08 . chapter 13What, Wilson didn't call the cops on John House? How... odd. John would have a hard time keeping his mouth shut to them, too.
Lisa, on the other hand, probably has hospital security ready to forcibly eject John from hospital grounds without so much as a by your leave. |
 Jameni 2008-03-08 . chapter 27 It`s over!?!
Well I guess it had to at some point.
(I just would have like it to go on and on...)
Great story -hop to see more from your pen soon!
..and thank you for sharing with us all!! |
 johnny-B-reading 2008-03-08 . chapter 27It's wrapped up wonderfully, and just the mention of Greg possibly moving on and marrying Cameron and maybe having a couple of kids just made the story for me (Hameron . You're writing has improved ten fold just since you started these stories and I hope that you will come up with another idea real soon. Like a giddy young busboy trying to steal an eye from a young beauty, when the old man ain't lookin', so that he may enjoy a sweet moment; I await another of your beautiful stories, so that I too will have my special moment. I guess you had to be there. |
 itzalliballi 2008-03-08 . chapter 27 aw so cute! are you goin to write an epilogue? hope so! |
 momsboys 2008-03-08 . chapter 27Wow I have been reading this story for hours. What an excellent story. I hated to see it end. I wish you would consider a sequel. There is so much more you didn't cover. I would love to read about Cameron helping House get through his therapy to walk again and there relationship growing together. House confiding in Cameron all that went on in his childhood. Please do a sequel this story was just to good to end here. |