Hi, I'm a new writer and I saw that you beta for Yellow Mask. Her writings are very well written and I was hoping that you could beta mine. It called Welcome Home. Its a SasuSaku fic and the summary is 5 years after Sasuke's Defection from Konoha, he is captured by Naruto along with Hawk, but without Sakura. Sakura sees him, punches him in the face and proceeds to ignore for a very long time. My username is Cherryblossom10. And I hope you really consider this offer.

heya! it would be really cool if u could make this like a chaptered fanfic. :D

Being the moron I am, even after a really well written story with irony (God I love irony), symbolism and metaphors even then I have to point out if a character is ooc. Clearly I have issues.

This was well thought out and cool in a way. I get that Sasuke had to swap personalities with her a bit or else the idea wouldn't work so that makes it completely okay in my books. And I love that she's completely in character but in an evolved way.

Again, it was great.

Amazing, your writing skills are truly surprising me. Most of the time one-shots wouldn't get me hooked but this one did. I loved it.

Very empowering to Sakura. Lovely writing, and a nice turnabout that is clearly fairplay. ^_^ I like to see Sasuke actually have some feelings - and I like to see things like this written, since uhm, it seems pretty clear that we SasuSaku shippers will NEVER be getting anything from the way the manga is going. Ugh. I'm so ** with him that I actually feel vindicated by the particularly vicious little barb that this fic ended with...

But anyway - even if it did end on a vicious barb, there's at least a little spark of hope in that she does still love him. We can only hope that if Sasuke kept trying to make amends, it might actually make a difference someday. And that we could actually have a happy ending, no? ^_^

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Aw, Poor Sasuke. It probably took him a while to muster up that courage to finally tell her that he loves her. xD

Although Sakura does have her reasons. =/

... SasuSaku is love. >.>

xD I enjoyed reading this, good job !

Been meaning to check out your stories for a while, and I'm glad I finally did - I love this oneshot! I love the role reversal thing, it makes it so...I don't really know how to say it...poignant? Bittersweet?

Either way - I liked it very much!

omg that was really good =] i loved it

Oh dear God. I didn't want to review on more than one of your works, because it sort of seems like I'm a creeper, but any writer, on hiatus or not, would love reviews, right? xD
I love you ideas. Seriously. I can't really explain into words what I'm feeling about this... seeing Sasuke desperate for Sakura almost reminds me of those expressions he used to make when he was young, begging Itachi for his life.
Everything was really in character. Really. And, honestly, I'm really picky with favorites. This oneshot's writing quality was a lot better than that other one's, but it's not magnificent in shining glory and stuff. But the plot was really making me debate on whether or not I should actually add it. I'm still undecided, but I guarantee you that I will come back to read this again one day.

I love this one-shot. Sasuke is a real bastard when it comes to Sakura and I love Fanfics where she finally matures and confronts Sasuke. I think understanding your feelings is much better then just putting on hold or ignoring them. When you do that you can't exactly grow up or move on with your life, can you? Your story was so great and deserves way more reviews. I loved how she left him on the bench without a thank you and even more so that Sasuke finally understood how mean to her he really was.

u should turn this into a story its so frickin awesome i luvd it and want to know if he ever wins her back that would be an awesone angsty story\

That was very good. No cleiched language or OOCness. It totally captured my imagination and attention. One fo the few stories on here that makes me forget that im reading a story!(if you get what i mean)

You should definitly write more often. perhaps you could do one like this except between naruto and sasuke. Not like him rejecting sasuke but just a little heart to heart.

OMG that was so pefect! Why don't you make chapters? Ah i feel sorry for Sasuke yet Sakura was really clever with her words and made a good point, it was soo god!

Oh. What irony it is...
It was great, your fanfiction is beautifully written that it made my heart wrench and my eyes teary.
Added to my fave list~!