I don't think Haruhi would wear so many fluffy pink things, but other than that, it's pretty good so far.

AH!! a confession! how kool...^^ love it!

NICE! LOVE OURAN!

wha! kaoru did that?! hahahahaXD this is funny!! ok!! im starting love this story^_^ neh? what will happen to haruhi & kaoru's date? im looking forward to it! since im a kaoruxharuhi fan anyway^_^

!!1st Review!!
It's a really good idea, you've got the characters really well, but you might want to tweak your grammar a bit. ^_^