 miharu365 2008-06-17 . chapter 1I don't think Haruhi would wear so many fluffy pink things, but other than that, it's pretty good so far. |
 xxfallin'leavesxx 2007-12-12 . chapter 1AH!! a confession! how kool...^^ love it! |
 Miksume 2007-12-01 . chapter 1NICE! LOVE OURAN! |
 ciafi13 2007-11-25 . chapter 1wha! kaoru did that?! hahahahaXD this is funny!! ok!! im starting love this story^_^ neh? what will happen to haruhi & kaoru's date? im looking forward to it! since im a kaoruxharuhi fan anyway^_^ |
 Fragmentility 2007-11-24 . chapter 1!!1st Review!!
It's a really good idea, you've got the characters really well, but you might want to tweak your grammar a bit. ^_^ |