Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Hatsukoi - Page 1 of 9
HinamoriNaruko6coolandspicy9
2009-12-13 . chapter 1
KYA!! this story is better than the story i wrote "Silver coin? FATE?" seriously it's so cute cute cute

sasuFEMnaru 4 ever
i-suk-at-writing
2009-12-07 . chapter 1
dam. this is a good story... heck its awesome. Continue writing :D you'll go far
BonbonJovi
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
aw... cute story... :))
ehanda
2009-11-12 . chapter 1
great story :] i loved it
KyouyaxCloud
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
kakoi, i hope you make this story to be a series,
thx
Anime18Emo
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
Amazing! Truly extraordinary! How do u come up with these deep intensely exciting plots? Whatever it is u do u are amazing at this! XD
HollowsGrace
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
Aw so swet! insert fan girl squeal
Naruisuke
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
so cute!! ^^
RogueNya
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
Well this was pretty interesting to read actually, I wonder why some of the others never thought up this seal idea...

But you did very well on the story.
MakotoNogami
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
WOW! This story is perfect!
DarkAnubisAngel
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Um... actually... this story would explain where Naruto got his sexyJutsu (actually the way you describe FemNaru sounds almost JUST like his sexyJutsu form LOL XD)

Well back to reading then ~runs off into little hidey hole, dragging laptop behind by the power cord~

DarkAnubisAngel
Lady Knight Keladry
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
Aww, that's so cute! I'm glad that in this case he wasn't a traitor. Damn, he works fast! Slipping the ring on her almost right after he sees her for the first time in 6 years was a really bold move. I like that amusing scene where Ino and Kiba were pairing people up.
alexa-catta123
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
Even though you said you were drunk. still one of the best NaruSasu I have read.:D
BetahimeTsukiko
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
I loved this, it was so sweet! The whole possesive streak was great, I love that twist. This couple is so cute and I like how there was contraversy over him making such a big decision without Noriko's concent, very realistic. I like your style, and I do believe that I will look into any other stories of yours. Have a good day, ja ne!
fox589
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
LOVE this story so much.
thats just how sasuke would act, possessive and ...basterdlishness
I also love femnaru I think being a women fits Naruto betterthen being a man, but thats just me
Return to Top